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I Will Love You Until My World Has Passed

I will love you until my world has passed though I offer it not a moment more, because love is too good to last and last. The first love among rosy cheeks comes fast which is far too soon to forget; therefore I will love you until my world has passed. A truce among parallel souls unmasked, it blossomed then withered, which I adore because love is too good to last and last. Immeasurable love, pure, humble, vast, like fuel and fire igniting my core, I will love you until my world has passed. Dwelling on a memory you cast, the hot hunger for the craving before Because love is too good to last and last, its tender meaning cannot be surpassed by quelling the heart; in fact, much more I will love you until my world has passed Because love is too good to last and last.

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Date: 4/25/2018 7:31:00 PM
Excellent creativity Elizabeth!! Deep and profound.. A pleasure to read.. All the best to you!
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Elizabeth Duran
Date: 5/18/2018 7:40:00 PM
Thank you <3
Date: 4/25/2018 7:25:00 PM
Powerful hook lines...wrap your poem in love...
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Elizabeth Duran
Date: 5/18/2018 7:40:00 PM
Thank you <3

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