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A Meditative Ballad
There are five stanzas structured as follows:
x
y is the first one 4 syllables per line both rhyme both are a kinda refrain
a
R1
R2
a this stanza has an ABBA rhyme scheme but the two middle lines are refrains to be repeated
each line is 8 syllables long
R1
a
a
R2 the rhyme scheme in the previous stanza is repeated but in opposite order the refrains consistently repeat BAAB
x
R1
a
R2
y the x & y lines repeat as do the refrains word for word and the middle line is still 8 syllables long and repeats the rhyme from the above stanzas
y
x repeats from the first stanza but in the opposite order.
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