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tableau couple | homme femme | peinture | l'amour par Lucie LLONG

I Want You

I want you 
Fantasy's a fleeting feeling 
I'm reeling for the reality of your kiss 
Luscious on my lips 
Ahhhh to taste 
Imagination's a waste 
I want you 

Riveted, you stand and stare 
Do I dare share 
this wanton whisper?
Shall I lay it bare?
I want you 

In every dream 
In every waking thought 
You're there
My eyes can't disguise 
Too foolish to be wise 
A dangerous disclosure:  
my feigned indifference? Just lies!
Desire's drive won't be denied 
I want you 

Proximity, passion's pull 
I crave 
I ache 
For heaven's sake 
My reserve's about to break 
Decorum's at stake 
But...but oh...how
I
   want
            you 

Cheeks crimson in the wake of your charisma 
Your eyes lock on mine
Body weak 
I can hardly speak 
That look...
Could it be true? 
Do you...want me too? 

As you move closer to me 
I feel the incendiary heat 
hit me in w~a~v~e~s 
In a daze 
Your gaze, this craze 

You lean in and whisper my name
Lay your claim 
There's no shame 
Who's to blame? 
Passion's hard to tame 

"I want you"... escapes ... ragged from your lips as they close on mine 
Melting into the sublime 
eternity bound in time

I feel you tilting my head back by my hair 
Your lips trailing everywhere 
Mine free to declare:

"Ahhhhh... 
I ...want....you!"

Eileen Manassian Ghali
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Hind Avatar
August 1, 2024 at 12:42 PM
Wow I really could really feel the fire of your poetry...beautiful <3
Lamoureux Avatar
November 7, 2023 at 5:51 AM
I love the intensity. Well worth revisiting.
Cornish Avatar
January 23, 2023 at 12:59 PM
A tempting teasing tigress ,,!
Horsman Avatar
December 11, 2022 at 9:57 PM
Love to see you back, and thanks for the visit to my poetry. Love this steamy poem, every male, must feel a part of the recipient, wishing and hoping. The poem, so sincere. Love it when you write like this. All the best for the festive season. Hope you are safe. Harry
Lamoureux Avatar
November 7, 2023 at 5:53 AM
You are missed old friend. I’m sure you are entertaining angels.
Dietrich Avatar
December 11, 2022 at 8:12 PM
that's a wow poem. I once felt this way for someone and wrote like this, many many years ago!!
Lamoureux Avatar
December 10, 2022 at 11:46 AM
You know how to bring the heat. Hot Hot Hot!
Andresen Avatar
December 10, 2022 at 10:55 AM
- Such a beautiful and romantic poem, Eileen :) - I send you warm Christmas wishes ... with your loved ones - Hope all is well with you - hugs and love
Richards Avatar
December 10, 2022 at 10:45 AM
I'm glad you are back and taking us again on a journey of passion as only you can, Eileen :))
Sands Avatar
December 10, 2022 at 10:30 AM
Full of passion. I like that line...passion's hard to tame. Well done :)
Buhagiar Avatar
December 10, 2022 at 3:42 AM
It's been a long time since I saw a poem of yours
Callus Avatar
December 9, 2022 at 10:53 AM
Sensuality, passion and desire are tools which you handle with utmost ease, dear Eileen. You turn fantasy into virtual reality. I am pleased that you came back to Soup, even if momentarily. ~ Warm regards & hugs // paul
Trifiatis Avatar
December 7, 2022 at 8:22 AM
You remain eternally young and your poetry is continually beautiful and fresh . Be blessed!
Ashley Avatar
December 4, 2022 at 12:59 PM
Dear Eileen, your poem sizzles! Passionate, sensual, beautiful! I adore your sultry imagery and the burning tension, and your use of alliteration, it sparkles within your verses. I also love how you animated the word “w~a~v~e~s” -so stirring! The pacing of the building intensity towards the luscious finale was perfect. It’s nice to see you.. your gifted pen has been missed. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Manassian Avatar
December 6, 2022 at 6:52 PM
You're very kind. Thanks ever so much. I'm facing a lot of challenging of late and it isn't easy to visit Poetry Soup as often. Thank you for visiting and commenting. I enjoyed your latest. Blessings
Bauer Avatar
December 4, 2022 at 12:05 PM
wow! nobody can describe passion like you can, eileen! i've missed your poems - so glad to have found this one today!
Manassian Avatar
December 6, 2022 at 6:53 PM
Thank you, dear. I've missed being here. I'm not able to visit as often due to life circumstances. Hope all is well with you.
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