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tableau couple | homme femme | peinture | l'amour par Lucie LLONG

I want you Fantasy's a fleeting feeling I'm reeling for the reality of your kiss Luscious on my lips Ahhhh to taste Imagination's a waste I want you Riveted, you stand and stare Do I dare share this wanton whisper? Shall I lay it bare? I want you In every dream In every waking thought You're there My eyes can't disguise Too foolish to be wise A dangerous disclosure: my feigned indifference? Just lies! Desire's drive won't be denied I want you Proximity, passion's pull I crave I ache For heaven's sake My reserve's about to break Decorum's at stake But...but oh...how I want you Cheeks crimson in the wake of your charisma Your eyes lock on mine Body weak I can hardly speak That look... Could it be true? Do you...want me too? As you move closer to me I feel the incendiary heat hit me in w~a~v~e~s In a daze Your gaze, this craze You lean in and whisper my name Lay your claim There's no shame Who's to blame? Passion's hard to tame "I want you"... escapes ... ragged from your lips as they close on mine Melting into the sublime eternity bound in time I feel you tilting my head back by my hair Your lips trailing everywhere Mine free to declare: "Ahhhhh... I ...want....you!" Eileen Manassian Ghali

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Date: 11/7/2023 5:51:00 AM
I love the intensity. Well worth revisiting.
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Date: 1/23/2023 12:59:00 PM
A tempting teasing tigress ,,!
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Date: 12/11/2022 9:57:00 PM
Love to see you back, and thanks for the visit to my poetry. Love this steamy poem, every male, must feel a part of the recipient, wishing and hoping. The poem, so sincere. Love it when you write like this. All the best for the festive season. Hope you are safe. Harry
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/7/2023 5:53:00 AM
You are missed old friend. I’m sure you are entertaining angels.
Date: 12/11/2022 8:12:00 PM
that's a wow poem. I once felt this way for someone and wrote like this, many many years ago!!
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Date: 12/10/2022 11:46:00 AM
You know how to bring the heat. Hot Hot Hot!
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Date: 12/10/2022 10:55:00 AM
- Such a beautiful and romantic poem, Eileen :) - I send you warm Christmas wishes ... with your loved ones - Hope all is well with you - hugs and love
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Date: 12/10/2022 10:45:00 AM
I'm glad you are back and taking us again on a journey of passion as only you can, Eileen :))
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Date: 12/10/2022 10:30:00 AM
Full of passion. I like that line...passion's hard to tame. Well done :)
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Date: 12/10/2022 3:42:00 AM
It's been a long time since I saw a poem of yours
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Date: 12/9/2022 10:53:00 AM
Sensuality, passion and desire are tools which you handle with utmost ease, dear Eileen. You turn fantasy into virtual reality. I am pleased that you came back to Soup, even if momentarily. ~ Warm regards & hugs // paul
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Date: 12/7/2022 8:22:00 AM
You remain eternally young and your poetry is continually beautiful and fresh . Be blessed!
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Date: 12/4/2022 12:59:00 PM
Dear Eileen, your poem sizzles! Passionate, sensual, beautiful! I adore your sultry imagery and the burning tension, and your use of alliteration, it sparkles within your verses. I also love how you animated the word “w~a~v~e~s” -so stirring! The pacing of the building intensity towards the luscious finale was perfect. It’s nice to see you.. your gifted pen has been missed. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/6/2022 6:52:00 PM
You're very kind. Thanks ever so much. I'm facing a lot of challenging of late and it isn't easy to visit Poetry Soup as often. Thank you for visiting and commenting. I enjoyed your latest. Blessings
Date: 12/4/2022 12:05:00 PM
wow! nobody can describe passion like you can, eileen! i've missed your poems - so glad to have found this one today!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/6/2022 6:53:00 PM
Thank you, dear. I've missed being here. I'm not able to visit as often due to life circumstances. Hope all is well with you.

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