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I Want Viv Wigleys Hat

I want to be the man in that black hat
Sitting down under where the Aussies do play
Drinking in barrels, Bundaberg ale
Smiling under my cool black hat 

Now I haven’t his hat
Nor that cool Aussie accent
I don’t live down under
Not even drinking that Bundaberg thunder

So I sit in a bar
Up north with Santa
Whose hat is jolly and so very red 
Not a lady in site and this night I do dread

Left with no options, no none at all
I steal Vigleys’ hat and man do I feel tall
As I strolled by the ladies all along the beach
They stare at my hat and oh my do they screech!!!!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Williams Avatar
August 19, 2015 at 1:14 AM
Hello Arthur ha good fun my friend, hope you are well and I still look in now and again just to keep an eye on good poems as yours are, yep go ahead with my hat....David
Vaso Avatar
August 21, 2015 at 8:48 PM
Glad to see you David! Do not be a stranger!
Dietrich Avatar
August 17, 2015 at 3:55 PM
hahaha, you went from a bar at the north pole to a beach with screeching women. I love this FUN poem, Arthur. Crocodile Dundee is Viv!!
Vaso Avatar
August 21, 2015 at 8:46 PM
Thanks Andrea, working on the next one!!!
Muideen Avatar
August 17, 2015 at 12:21 PM
What a fabulous write it is intriguing, I burst in to laughing as I read this. A very excellence write. thanks for shared.............A.M.
Vaso Avatar
August 21, 2015 at 8:46 PM
Thank you Afolabi, glad you enjoyed!
Smith Avatar
August 17, 2015 at 12:10 PM
I'll have to tip back a Foster's at lunch when I go to the Outback Steakhouse. Love those bloomin onions.
Vaso Avatar
August 21, 2015 at 8:45 PM
LOL thanks Tim!
Pinet Avatar
August 17, 2015 at 12:05 PM
The words are descriptive and lively, slapped onto the page with a poetic hand and a brilliant wit that captures the reader's imagination and attention from the beginning and delivers to the end. The words are colorful with a realistic sound, adding a flavor to this saga of the hat. Emile.
Vaso Avatar
August 21, 2015 at 8:45 PM
Thank you Emile! More to come in this fun series!!! :)
Allison Avatar
August 17, 2015 at 3:00 AM
Yes Mr Viv is our own British version of crocodile Dundee - you can see him regularly at the water park wrestling the inflatable toys. Seriously Arthur, Mr Viv lives in the city I grew up in so it is so lovely reminiscing - hey maybe one fine day I may even meet up with him:-) Hugs Jan xx
Allison Avatar
August 17, 2015 at 11:42 AM
It would be lovely to meet either of you :-) hugs Jan xx
Vaso Avatar
August 17, 2015 at 10:28 AM
well now, you cant be to sure anymore, if it will be me or him, after all I might have his hat!!!!
Allison Avatar
August 17, 2015 at 6:31 AM
LOL - its got to be Aldi/Lidl chocolate - will send you a list lol:-) hugs jan xx
Wigley Avatar
August 17, 2015 at 4:14 AM
Isle of Man beer festival next year is on my bucket list. I shall bring chocolates and toilet rolls x
Laurie Avatar
August 17, 2015 at 1:42 AM
G'day Arthur... a nice tribute to a bonzer bloke whose style of writing had me thinking he lived beyond the black stump and pretended he was English. Eating cold pies and drinking warm beer gave him away - Lindsay
Vaso Avatar
August 17, 2015 at 10:22 AM
LOL thanks! for some reason Viv's comment appeared here. Have a great day!
Vaso Avatar
August 17, 2015 at 10:20 AM
Well we should all be Aussies for at least a day!!! Cheers
Wigley Avatar
August 17, 2015 at 1:26 AM
A bonzer verse, mate, too right- I'm stoked that you went to the trouble, but worth the wait, too right, cobber. Good onya. I may just hit the turps later to celebrate.... and never mind that you found out too late that I'm English and my Avatar was photographed in Namibia, no worries. Still a fun write, and I'm honoured. Thanks muchly Arthur. Regards, Viv
Vaso Avatar
August 17, 2015 at 10:21 AM
We should all be Aussies for at least a day!!! Cheers
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