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Let's lay in each other's arms Feel the comfort it can bring We were meant to be together I'll be your queen, you my king To fight each other's demons We will be each other's home Give a security neither felt Removing all our need to roam I want to show you a true family Always to be there by your side Let you see how good it can be For you to feel that kind of pride Hold you thru the darkest nights You deserve nothing but the best Take some of your burdens too Calming you when you can't rest I want you to experience a family The happiness that one will feel To be given unconditional love Making life meaningful and real

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Date: 2/24/2020 5:10:00 PM
Just happen to be so thankful for family lately --- even penned a short monorhyme about family caring today --- and here is your beautiful poem about what a wonderful woman can mean to and do for a (lonely) man. Bravo, Brenda! Warmest wishes, Gershon
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Date: 2/21/2020 7:26:00 AM
Congrats Brenda on your podium win--suck wonderful sentiments you expressed!
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 2/21/2020 10:32:00 AM
Vijay thank you so very much;)
Date: 2/20/2020 9:09:00 PM
This is very beautiful, Brenda. Congrats on your win! Also, thank you so much for my wonderful placement in your contest. I am truly humbled. Hugs Charlie
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 2/21/2020 10:32:00 AM
Charles thank you and trust it was a pleasure to read you!;)
Date: 2/20/2020 8:54:00 AM
Congrats Brenda!
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 2/21/2020 10:32:00 AM
Thank you LJ! Appreciate the visit!;)
Date: 2/19/2020 10:42:00 PM
Let's hear it for togetherness! Congrats on your win, Brenda
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 2/20/2020 3:52:00 AM
Thank you so much John!;)
Date: 2/18/2020 12:27:00 AM
Brenda, Touching two hearts to build on the best of both, 'We will be each other's home Give a security neither felt Removing all our need to roam'. The world needs more poems like this. -Richard
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 2/19/2020 3:29:00 PM
Ahhh yes the world needs a lot of things and this could be one of those! Thank you do much!()
Date: 2/16/2020 1:15:00 AM
Beautifully penned, Brenda...soothing in a warm and reassuring way, almost like a lullaby -- love it! In fondest affection. :) john
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 2/19/2020 3:26:00 PM
Ahh John the one I fo look for each time I post! Thank you so much!;) big hugs!;)
Date: 2/15/2020 4:31:00 PM
A lovely penned piece Brenda, so full of positive family traits with great imagery and fine insight. Have a great weekend,Gordon
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 2/19/2020 3:26:00 PM
Gordon you are so kind! Thank you!;)
Date: 2/14/2020 11:02:00 PM
This is very beautiful Brenda, especially your last stanza that includes giving unconditional love. This kind of love lasts forever and is the secret to a happy union. Happy Valentine's Day my friend! xxoo
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 2/19/2020 3:25:00 PM
Connie thank you so much for your kindness!;)

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