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I Want To Know

Resting on this oversized jagged rock Gazing out across the vast blue sea Waves crashing upon the stony shore A soft mist spraying, showering me I think... I think of you as the seagulls glide up in the air as the morning sun rises o'er the horizon as the soft wind blows in my thinning hair what were you like? what did you do? were you the same before I met you? Were your eyes elegant, like pools of love? Did you see beauty in the littlest of things? Were you always this so darn sweet? Did your dreams soar on angels wings? I want to know all of who you are What you did and where you came I want to know your thoughts and dreams Your favorite flowers, colors, and names As the sun drops down and the stars shine bright I wonder... I wonder what you are thinking tonight

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Date: 2/19/2015 9:42:00 AM
Hi Tim. Hey, this is a great love poem and very well written. These type of inquisitive thoughts are just the things that a woman loves to hear. Straight from the heart these questions are asked and if the feelings are mutual the answers will come from the heart. A pleasure to read my friend.... Robert.
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Date: 2/19/2015 9:44:00 AM
Thanks Robert.... Good to see you....cheers Tim
Date: 2/18/2015 10:10:00 PM
very romantic write.
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Date: 2/19/2015 9:43:00 AM
Thanks Nate
Date: 2/17/2015 7:58:00 PM
This wonderful little poem is a lesson on how to romance a woman Tim. You write about things a woman wants to be asked about that doesn't dwell on lust, just love. Beautiful! Bravo! 7 for me
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Date: 2/18/2015 11:34:00 AM
Thanks Connie...If I plan on spending the rest of my years with her I need to look beyond just the physical beauty and explore all about her...hugs Tim
Date: 2/17/2015 4:36:00 PM
You draw me in by your imagery, musing and the urge to know more about your love. In the meantime you can bathe in the knowledge that there is someone who at her own pace can divulge what you'd like to know....all in good time!
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Date: 2/18/2015 11:31:00 AM
Thanks Paul...you are right I have nothing but time to find out all...Tim
Date: 2/17/2015 4:35:00 PM
I wonder thought of a new person in someones life. Beautiful & inquisitive write a 7 Sir.
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Date: 2/18/2015 11:30:00 AM
Thank you Eve...Yes you are right...hugs Tim
Date: 2/17/2015 11:09:00 AM
such a sweet romantic write Tim.. a 7 from me.. nad!
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Date: 2/17/2015 4:01:00 PM
Thank you nad...hugs Tim
Date: 2/17/2015 10:38:00 AM
An ocean's romantic breeze, dear Tim!
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Date: 2/17/2015 3:59:00 PM
Thank you Demetrios my good friend
Date: 2/17/2015 8:52:00 AM
Inquiring minds want to know -- nicely done Tim. 7
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Date: 2/17/2015 9:03:00 AM
That they do my friend....thanks
Date: 2/16/2015 11:45:00 PM
Very nice poem seems you free flow well love it.
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Date: 2/16/2015 11:51:00 PM
Thanks again Terry
Date: 2/16/2015 8:56:00 PM
Just lovely...the word flows like sweet water from a brook...cool and soothing to the soul...yet warms the heart...Cheers to your pen, Tim! Sunshine and smiles from the land of thousand isles...:D Kim
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Date: 2/16/2015 11:50:00 PM
Thanks Kim...I just let my feelings flow.... Hugs Tim
Date: 2/16/2015 7:00:00 PM
A lovely work contemplative and tender. full marks for this one. 7++ love Shane
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Date: 2/16/2015 11:49:00 PM
Thank you my friend...cheers Tim
Date: 2/16/2015 6:08:00 PM
Good romantic stuff Tim!
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Date: 2/16/2015 11:48:00 PM
Thank you Ken
Date: 2/16/2015 4:13:00 PM
The poet must be in love and lost in thought..Are you trying to hit the jackpot for another poem of the week?.So beautiful this is.A fav!
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Date: 2/16/2015 4:17:00 PM
He must be and lost in thought...thank you Charmaine...hugs Tim
Date: 2/16/2015 4:04:00 PM
simply beautiful Tim I especially love the final couplet:-) Hugs Jan xx 7
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Date: 2/18/2015 2:58:00 PM
Thanks Jan....hugs Tim

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