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I Want To Be

I want to be where the air is fresh and clean and smell the scent of decaying matter providing nutrients to mother earth I want to be where I can see animals running free under massive trees and where large boulders full of moss and lichen live I want to be where one can view the sky at night and wonder at the universe full of lonely stars shining down long after they have vanished I want to be where I can listen to the sounds of nature and the conversations that take place between the trees and plants as they joyfully enjoy themselves I want to be where one can see the silvery moon and its craters with the naked eyes and marvel at its reflecting light that has joined together many lovers Perhaps I can travel there in my dreams if I could only tune out the noise of people, vehicles and city lights and sleep.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 5/18/2018 10:35:00 AM
Your longing for tranquility is so beautifully stated, especially the last line about wanting sleep-
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Lunita Blanca
Date: 5/18/2018 5:31:00 PM
Thanks for visiting Michelle.
Date: 5/14/2018 1:47:00 PM
I hope that you can visit or live in the place you want to be ! It is like what you describe, here. :)
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Lunita Blanca
Date: 5/14/2018 7:13:00 PM
Thank you Heidi. I'm searching for a place in upstate New York.
Date: 5/13/2018 6:26:00 AM
The endless search for home, where body and mind are in balance with nature. This is my wish, too, Carlos, well done.
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Lunita Blanca
Date: 5/14/2018 7:15:00 PM
Thanks Phil. Liked your write about the person who lives in our house.
Date: 5/9/2018 12:59:00 PM
To be so in tune to nature would be fantastic. Those last lines really brought home the need to get out of the rat race and truly live.
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Lunita Blanca
Date: 5/9/2018 6:37:00 PM
Yes Ellen. I enjoyed your writes. Thanks for visiting.
Date: 5/8/2018 5:35:00 PM
Very well done, Carlos You don't have to be careful wishing for this.
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Lunita Blanca
Date: 5/8/2018 6:24:00 PM
Perhaps when I take a vacation, I will visit the state or Oregon.

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