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September 25, 2015
Contest:  You Want it Bad – Then Bribe Me
Sponsor:  Casarah Nance
Third Place

Having permission to be mean has me rushing to this scene.  
Trouble is, I don’t want her to see or hear me because then 
she’ll surely fear me.  I can’t let her know how low I’ll go if 
good poem placement doesn’t show.

Should she take my poem to use or abuse, then I’ll give her my 
indignation news!  How dare she treat me with no care and as 
any less than the very best.  

Obviously, she is not conscientiously aware of what my five foot, 
two inch frame can do.  She wouldn’t mess me around if she had 
a clue.  If my anger should stay, even throwing a stick wouldn’t 
make me go away.

I used to write and pace.  Now I pace and think of her face.  
Yepper, she best give me first place.  If she should choose that
I lose, well, then I’ll whack her with my pen.  If I go down, she, 
too, will hit the ground.  She’ll bruise.  I’d rather face disgrace 
than settle for no medal.

I always count syllables and use any means to enhance my rhyme 
schemes.  I do not work so hard for her to poetry-dream-rob.

She’ll know I have power and that I’m no mouse when every 
hour pizza arrives at her house.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 10/17/2015 9:28:00 PM
Congrats on your win CAyCay! Love the threats!
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Date: 10/15/2015 11:49:00 AM
CayCay,, congrats on the win, LINDA
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Date: 10/14/2015 2:59:00 PM
You wanted it badly, CayCay, and now you stand on the winning podium! (honoured to be standing next to you:)) You have a great sense of humour. Is that pizza thin crust.....? hmmmm. ~ Congratulations!! // paul
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Date: 10/13/2015 7:42:00 PM
Great job Cay Cay, congrats on your win!
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Date: 10/13/2015 4:02:00 AM
CayCay nice win!!!!
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Date: 10/12/2015 11:19:00 PM
Awesome write n win Caycay, loved the wit! Big congrats!
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Date: 10/12/2015 9:25:00 PM
So funny, CayCay! You did so good! Congrats on your nice win! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 10/12/2015 6:32:00 PM
Hey, wish I'd thought of that pizza part!! That was the last thing she couldn't turn down!! LOL !! Great work, Caycay....so cute!
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Date: 10/12/2015 2:33:00 PM
Ouch, that hurts. ha fun read. SKAT
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Date: 10/12/2015 2:30:00 PM
Yup this made me laugh out loud because I do manage a pizza place....I love the rhyme scheme too, one of my favorite and enjoyable textures to read. Thanks for writing!
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Date: 10/15/2015 7:27:00 AM
Oh, my - how ironic - I had no idea you lived pizza already! I enjoyed your fun contest very much. Thank you, Casarah, for the opportunity ... CayCay
Date: 10/12/2015 2:25:00 PM
Gosh you tried all the tricks in the trade for this one Caycay - the pizza delivery bit cracked me up as I think maybe Cas manages a pizza place lol - congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/11/2015 12:21:00 PM
Nicely done CayCay... LINDA
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Date: 10/12/2015 7:28:00 AM
Thank you, Linda - It was so much fun to write! ... CayCay
Date: 10/7/2015 10:30:00 AM
lovely and joyful
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Date: 10/8/2015 8:11:00 PM
Thank you, Diane. It was lovely of you to comment. It is so fulfilling when someone enjoys my words. I'm sure that is true for all poets on this site ... CayCay
Date: 9/30/2015 11:35:00 PM
Funny poem. Good one.
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Date: 10/1/2015 12:47:00 AM
Thank you, I hope you read it after you teared up and laughed out loud ... CayCay
Date: 9/29/2015 1:46:00 PM
Lol, am scared now:-) nice one my friend. all the best in the contest
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Date: 9/29/2015 5:33:00 PM
Thank you, sweetheart. I imagine a smile on your adorable face ... CayCay
Date: 9/28/2015 5:42:00 AM
Hilarious, however I would give you first place for I do not want to mess with your dynamic face! I have enjoyed it, CayCay. Good luck. Very convincing and for that a seven!
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Date: 9/28/2015 5:40:00 PM
Demetrios - you flatter me and I love it! Thank you for such kind and generous words ... CayCay
Date: 9/26/2015 9:51:00 PM
Dear CayCay Wow talk about honesty, I've got a size 11 wide myself, for a woman that's a big foot, if you need any help let me know lol, otherwise you go girl, take no poetic prisoners, lol again, I don't enter to many contests anymore, don't have the time for the stress of it, many in the winter do I enter a few hear and their, but I'll cross my fingers and stay out of the way on this one, lol cheri
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Date: 9/28/2015 5:38:00 PM
Hey, Cherl - i enjoyed your comments! Yes, I may borrow your shoes! CayCay
Date: 9/26/2015 11:18:00 AM
alright alright you are a meanie,but why did you categorize this as a free verse?It flowed and rhymed so nicely.I wonder what Casarah was thinking when she provided the prompt.giggles.
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Date: 9/26/2015 1:06:00 PM
First, I had it as lyric, then I read someone else's that rhymed in paragraph form, but was marked as free verse. I'm confused. I'll go back to lyric. I am glad you understand just how mean I am ... CayCay
Date: 9/26/2015 11:15:00 AM
CayCay, love the humour in your write , best of luck and thanks for visiting my poem, cracked and fragmented ...
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Date: 9/26/2015 7:46:00 AM
all the tricks utilized here to snatch a win--bribery, manipulation, harassment... i'll go for the pizza, caycay... awesome!.. huggs
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Date: 9/26/2015 8:42:00 AM
Thanks for reading, Nette. I hope you write one for the contest to, it is a lot of fun. I appreciate your comment ... CayCay
Date: 9/26/2015 2:26:00 AM
MEANiIE!!! MEANIE!!! MEANIE!!! I didn't know that you could go this low over a (Metal?) you meant medal...right? Great write you MEANIE!!!
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Date: 9/26/2015 7:26:00 AM
My thought was that bronze, silver and gold are metals. I am so mean and now you know! I am glad you enjoyed it ... CayCay
Date: 9/26/2015 12:41:00 AM
You go, girl!!! :) Loved this piece to the max!!! So glad I don't sponsor contests. Yikes! You really impressed me with your mean....Is that what the contest is about? I got to check it out! Hugs
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Date: 9/26/2015 7:28:00 AM
The contest calls for bribing, scaring or any other means to convince her to choose you. You'll see some clever writes posted. I am thrilled that you liked the write ... CayCay
Date: 9/26/2015 12:36:00 AM
You go, girl!!! :) Loved this piece to the max!!! So glad I don't sponsor contests. Yikes! You really impressed me with your mean....Is that what the contest is about? I got to check it out! Hugs
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Date: 9/25/2015 11:27:00 PM
I AM VOTING FOR YOU! And its not even my contest! I do not sponsor contests but ya put da fear in me too. lol Great , creative write my friend. I hope you get that high medal! A7
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Date: 9/26/2015 7:31:00 AM
Hi, Robert - I can see the smile on your face when you responded to this one. Thank you for commenting. So glad you liked the write ... CayCay
Date: 9/25/2015 11:23:00 PM
You shouldn't drink if you're going to be nasty lol Love how you've taken this angle with your write. Good luck
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Date: 9/26/2015 7:30:00 AM
I've never been able to enjoy drinking, but, yes - imagine if I did! Oh, then I'd probably just hug and kiss her to death before I got sick. It was another fun one, Mark, and I'm glad you liked it ... CayCay
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