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I Wandered Lonely As a Rose

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William Wordsworth's quote, "I wandered lonely as a cloud" I wandered lonely as a rose by Autumn's gate each petal strewn And as I lay there in repose I fell apart, like dessert moon The scent that once perfumed my reign was mellowed by September's rain I drifted distant as the woods while all my husks fell to the soil each petal dried right where it stood No gardener's hand did sweet embroil the filaments that quivered slow like dying embers of nights glow I shambled windblown as the wind beneath the last of summer's ray Regretfully I did rescind as summer lost her fired splay; I wandered lonely as a rose until the end of summer, froze. September 20 2022 Sponsor Natasha L Scragg Contest Name I Wandered Lonely As

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Date: 9/24/2022 8:17:00 PM
"The scent that once perfumed my reign was mellowed by September's rain", Congrats on your win with this beautiful wrte Vie...
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Date: 9/25/2022 4:37:00 AM
Thank you, Joseph, for singling out my poetry today. Was nice to see you on my page. Keep well, keep penning and stay away from aliens lol
Date: 9/24/2022 4:02:00 AM
A beautiful entry Mystic Rose. I feel this poem is symbolic of something ending. It is quite poignant. Thank you for sharing in the contest and congrats on your placement. :-D
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Date: 9/25/2022 4:36:00 AM
This contest of yours was really fun to do Natasha, Thank you for running it and thank you for my placement, love xo
Date: 9/23/2022 8:13:00 PM
This is indeed a lament - the lament of a withering rose."The scent that once perfumed my reign was mellowed by September's rain ". Soaked in rain and scorched in heat, the poor flower was fated to lie unnoticed. Powerful poem . Wish you Rose, all the best in the contest.
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Date: 9/24/2022 2:25:00 AM
Thank you for your insightful comment Valsa. Yes indeed like the rose we too have a day of birth and a day of expiration. The secret is to live much while we're still here.
Date: 9/22/2022 12:26:00 PM
Lovely penning Rose with some Wordsworth tones making it a real eye catcher. Great pen!
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Date: 9/22/2022 6:35:00 PM
Thank you for reading and commenting Gordon. I always loved Wordsworth poetry,
Date: 9/22/2022 7:12:00 AM
This is lovely Vie and listening to you recite it was delightful. hugs, Alice
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Date: 9/22/2022 6:34:00 PM
Thank you for stopping by Linda, it was a pleasure reading your comment this evening.
Date: 9/21/2022 9:06:00 PM
Wow, this is sublime, I just love 'filaments that quivered slow' and 'windblown as the wind' - so mournful, and the closing lines come together so perfectly, best wishes for the contest~
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Date: 9/22/2022 4:12:00 AM
We are like roses, we bloom we live and one day we die, but the in between scents of us, is what takes our breath away, thanks for reading my friend :)
Date: 9/21/2022 12:28:00 PM
From the dust of petals roses return fresh...for their laurels of thorn. When stepping from the ledge of blossom the soul is given wings...and soars for eternity. Enchanting read, Rose. Although this poem exhibits oodles of intelligence and skill, I often think the beauty of great poetry, in itself, is reason enough. Greatness here! Thank you.
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Date: 9/22/2022 4:12:00 AM
Your comments are appreciated and well received thank you for your kind visit Joe, have a great day.
Date: 9/21/2022 11:19:00 AM
As frozen as Thomas Moore's, "Last Rose of Summer"? Aloha!
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Date: 9/22/2022 4:11:00 AM
yes indeed Rico, even roses die when it is their time, winter kisses them and they are gone for another season. Thanks for reading loyally, :)
Date: 9/21/2022 6:56:00 AM
Vie wonderfully written.Enjoyed reading this morning. Thanks for sharing and Losts of best wishes for the Contest Dear lady...
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Date: 9/21/2022 9:27:00 AM
Thankyou Michael for dropping in, Roses imitate humans we all have life, scent and dying power, except the rose gets mulched to the ground, and we rise above, like a dear old priest once told me, we all make it to heaven, some of us limping some of us straight as an arrow, but we all go t through that narrow gate. take care
Date: 9/21/2022 3:26:00 AM
Dear Vie, I got totally stuck with this challenge so I searched for inspiration. This is lovely...Delice
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Date: 9/21/2022 5:22:00 AM
it was not an easy form Delice, it took me long, but it was worth it, thanks for stopping by
Date: 9/20/2022 8:26:00 PM
A very nice reflection on the last days of the rose, Vie. I think it's a marvelous entry for the contest, and I wish you much success.
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Date: 9/21/2022 5:21:00 AM
Thank you, Milton, for stopping by roses are precious flowers, in a way they are eternal,
Date: 9/20/2022 8:25:00 PM
Wow! This is so beautiful! Enjoyed from start to finish
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Date: 9/21/2022 5:21:00 AM
Thank you seeker, I love roses, in every stage of their season,

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