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I Wandered Lonely As a Cloud

“I wandered lonely as a cloud”* and cried, “This life is but a shroud.” The unrelenting isolation intensified my firm fixation on unseen chains and rife frustration. What plunged me into this abyss? What enemy decreed I miss companionship with all its blessings? I am the culprit, now confessing I was the cause of my own stressing. *Title of a poem by William Wordsworth Date Posted: February 1, 2020 Contest: Famous Poetic Lines that Inspire Poetry Contest placed 3rd Sponsor: Silent One February 6, 2020, entered in the Strand Select F Contest May 21, 2020, entered in John Hamilton's Best Poem 2020 Contest (Poem posted February 1, 2020)

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Date: 2/7/2020 11:11:00 PM
Janice, Such nice rhyming and meter based on the Wordsworth quote. Congratulations!
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 2/8/2020 8:19:00 AM
Thank you so much, Sam. Janice
Date: 2/5/2020 5:02:00 PM
Hello Janice … I did enjoy your verse, especially for how it ends when accepting the blame. Too many people these days won't accept they are wrong and responsibility - thank you Janice - Lindsay
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 2/5/2020 11:03:00 PM
Thanks so much, Lindsay. Janice
Date: 2/3/2020 4:39:00 PM
Ooh, great ending, Janice! Congrats on your win. Hugs, Carolyn
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 2/4/2020 7:54:00 AM
Thanks so much, Carolyn. Janice
Date: 2/3/2020 7:02:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win, Janice :) - greetings from // Anne-Lise :)
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 2/3/2020 8:06:00 AM
Thanks so much, Anne-Lise. Janice
Date: 2/2/2020 8:15:00 AM
I am reading your poem a bit late--congrats on your win Janice. An evocative write--a dialogue on love and life!
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 2/2/2020 1:11:00 PM
Thank you so much, Vijay. Janice
Date: 2/2/2020 7:00:00 AM
a victim of ones own crime... nice take on the contest.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 2/2/2020 1:10:00 PM
Thank you. Janice
Date: 2/1/2020 7:44:00 PM
Janice, it is a fact, we as humans always make the simplest things complicated. I wouldn't beat myself up. In the long run, I think I have been happier single than I ever was when I was married. Good luck:) Well written!
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 2/1/2020 8:09:00 PM
Thanks so much, Daniel. Janice
Date: 2/1/2020 6:55:00 PM
very nicely done, janice! best of luck in the contest...
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 2/1/2020 7:20:00 PM
Thanks so much, Ilene. Janice
Date: 2/1/2020 6:30:00 PM
Well thought out and accomplished! Aloha! Rico
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 2/1/2020 7:21:00 PM
Thanks so much, Rico. Janice

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