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In my life so far, I have suffered pain,
  been overcome with emotions of anger, hurt;
    silent, I never did complain,
    I just became an introvert;
      I was detached and flat.
  Then, one day I became a wildcat,
  I was so tired of being a doormat !
  I became full of fury and wrath, and rage,
a warrior fierce and in war I did engage;
until in deep anguish-   I was in a locked cage.

  An emotional cage of hurt and anger,
  my spirit shattered-  my heart aching;
    I went still and took a breather,
    the path I was on-  crumbling;
      then, revenge inside me faded,
  I did not want to be the thing I hated
  so all the hurt and anger I halted.
  The effects of careless words last a lifetime,
but instead of fighting back, I take downtime;
and since I let go-  I dwell in the sublime.

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November 28, 2017

Poetry/Rhyme/'I walked with hurt and anger'
Copyright Protected, ID 17-9670-08-0
All Rights Reserved.  Written Under Pseudonym.



Written for the contest, Emotional Anger and Hurt
sponsor, Lewis Raynes
   
Fourth Place

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 12/15/2017 11:11:00 PM
Best wishes and congratulations on your win, onstance - keep up the great work! :-)
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Date: 12/12/2017 11:53:00 AM
This is just beautiful BW!! Full of introspective emotion! Your journey is inspiring!! ~ Judy
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Date: 12/1/2017 10:51:00 PM
That is definitely " one to grow on" <3 congratulations xomo!
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Date: 11/30/2017 2:42:00 PM
Sometimes it is hard to let go of anger and hurt, but we are so much better off when we finally do. I wish you all the best with this fine write, Constance!
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Date: 11/29/2017 6:34:00 AM
A meaningful message in this poem--well done, BW!
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Date: 11/29/2017 2:03:00 AM
You always touch my emotions with your beautifully written poetry, Constance. Best wishes for the contest. Hugs. T.J
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