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'i Walked With Hurt and Anger'

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In my life so far, I have suffered pain, been overcome with emotions of anger, hurt; silent, I never did complain, I just became an introvert; I was detached and flat. Then, one day I became a wildcat, I was so tired of being a doormat ! I became full of fury and wrath, and rage, a warrior fierce and in war I did engage; until in deep anguish- I was in a locked cage. An emotional cage of hurt and anger, my spirit shattered- my heart aching; I went still and took a breather, the path I was on- crumbling; then, revenge inside me faded, I did not want to be the thing I hated so all the hurt and anger I halted. The effects of careless words last a lifetime, but instead of fighting back, I take downtime; and since I let go- I dwell in the sublime. _____________________________ November 28, 2017 Poetry/Rhyme/'I walked with hurt and anger' Copyright Protected, ID 17-9670-08-0 All Rights Reserved. Written Under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, Emotional Anger and Hurt sponsor, Lewis Raynes Fourth Place

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Date: 12/15/2017 11:11:00 PM
Best wishes and congratulations on your win, onstance - keep up the great work! :-)
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Date: 12/12/2017 11:53:00 AM
This is just beautiful BW!! Full of introspective emotion! Your journey is inspiring!! ~ Judy
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Date: 12/1/2017 10:51:00 PM
That is definitely " one to grow on" <3 congratulations xomo!
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Date: 11/29/2017 6:34:00 AM
A meaningful message in this poem--well done, BW!
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