I Walked Through A Tunnel - Surrealism Poetry

I walked through a tunnel
like a finger rubbing around 
the inside of a wine glass
round and round
fround bround vround tround
round and round
through the tunnel as a funnel
speeding up
kround zround jround pround
I walked through a tunnel
down to the darkness
down and down
bown hown rown zown
down and down
round and round 
dark and stark
I walked through a tunnel
to myself who wasn’t there
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De Beaulieu Avatar
September 30, 2024 at 2:42 PM
Hello Clive Culverhouse, hi! so nice to meet you. i just read this poem. I like it. it sounds creepy. Enjoy your day my friend. /darlene/
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October 1, 2024 at 10:08 AM
Hello Clive Culverhouse, Your welcome. enjoy your daay my friend. /Darlene/
Culverhouse Avatar
October 1, 2024 at 12:20 AM
Thanks for reading Darlene, nice to meet you too
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