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I Touch The Sun

I touch the sun and have some fun, Leaping and bouncing and splashing, Looking up when the day is done, I touch the sun. To the deep, down I come crashing, The jumping orca, I'm the one, Who is showing off and flashing. 'bove and below the waves I run, My ocean friends call me dashing, With my frolicking, all I stun, I touch the sun. Image #5

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Date: 7/15/2025 9:27:00 AM
Vividly imaginative - awesome writing Jo. :) ps: Congrats!
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Date: 7/7/2025 5:37:00 PM
Really great job here. Congrats
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Date: 7/7/2025 12:51:00 PM
Love this! I touch the sun... lovely line. Xo
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Date: 7/7/2025 11:57:00 AM
Congrats on your win Jo, Very nicely penned
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Date: 6/30/2025 10:52:00 AM
Dear Joanna, your poem is beautiful and personifies the orca with vibrant, animated imagery that feels so joyful and free. The title and refrain "I touch the sun" is so enlivening! Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes for you.. ~Susan
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