I Told the Sun - For Darren White

I told the sun – for Darren White I told the sun who told the sky who told the clouds and made them cry the rain drops told a bumble bee who told a rose who told a tree the tree then told a butterfly who told a bluebird flying high who told the stars who told the moon Now we all say please get well soon Hoping you feel better soon Darren

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Date: 6/24/2017 12:20:00 AM
This is beautiful, Chris, for a great person:) hope it makes him better:)
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Chris Green
Date: 6/26/2017 8:34:00 AM
Thanks so very much Jo. I hope so too.
Date: 6/20/2017 8:17:00 PM
Chris, all your writings are amazing, its hard to come up with different ways to say that, however this one, well knowing Darren, any poem that on top of being so well written has that much heart in it, is to me not just a beautiful poem, is a GREAT poem! :)
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Chris Green
Date: 6/21/2017 8:27:00 AM
Oh...this poem. :) That'll teach me to read mail before comments. Thanks so much Arthur, I am thrilled you liked this one. Please, be my guest.
Date: 6/17/2017 6:23:00 AM
WHAT a feelings for a friend! Pray for Darren. Get well soon.
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Chris Green
Date: 6/19/2017 9:27:00 AM
Thanks so very much. I am happy you liked this one.
Date: 6/13/2017 6:05:00 PM
Don't know how I missed this precious poem. Get well, Darren.
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Chris Green
Date: 6/14/2017 8:45:00 AM
Thank you Sunlite. I believe he is feeling much better.
Date: 6/13/2017 7:07:00 AM
Such a sweet write and it has that feeling of hope throughout. Loved it Chris. Hope Darren is feeling better.
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Chris Green
Date: 6/13/2017 8:05:00 AM
Thank you so very much Wilma. I hope he is as well.
Date: 6/12/2017 4:13:00 AM
Good Morning Chris. I for one second your thoughts and words. I found this beautiful. Yes, I hope he is feeling better. The meaning of friendship and blessing shine here in your entry. I hope all is well with you. Have a wonderful morning and day.
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Chris Green
Date: 6/12/2017 8:11:00 AM
Thank you so very much Lisa.
Date: 6/11/2017 9:47:00 PM
=D if you passed this around I'd sign it, lovely sweet and sunny, wonderful write Chris xomo
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Chris Green
Date: 6/12/2017 8:11:00 AM
Thanks so much Maureen
Date: 6/9/2017 12:11:00 PM
Best get well card, I never got. Lol! Beautiful poem, Chris. Hope my man, Darren recovers soon. Wonderful poetry that dances w/joy. Love always.
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Chris Green
Date: 6/12/2017 8:10:00 AM
Ah well, you can share it Freddie. : ) Thanks my friend.
Date: 6/9/2017 4:30:00 AM
This is a lovely rhyme Chris :) brings a smile!
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Chris Green
Date: 6/12/2017 8:10:00 AM
Thanks so much Sara.
Date: 6/9/2017 3:13:00 AM
What a wonderful little poem for Darren, who I can see absolutely adores it....Maria
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Chris Green
Date: 6/12/2017 8:10:00 AM
Thanks so much Maria
Date: 6/9/2017 12:43:00 AM
Aww Chris, THANK YOU! :D HUGS This is such a perfect little poem, imma gonna fave it. It sings and dances and makes me smile and happy.
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Chris Green
Date: 6/12/2017 8:09:00 AM
I am happy you liked it my friend.
Date: 6/8/2017 8:10:00 PM
That was quite wonderful, Chris!
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Chris Green
Date: 6/12/2017 8:09:00 AM
Thanks so much Kim
Date: 6/8/2017 7:45:00 PM
ahh, so so cute. and I hope he gets well.I did not hear about this!!!
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Date: 6/12/2017 8:09:00 AM
Thanks so much Andrea
Date: 6/8/2017 7:43:00 PM
Very cute, this perfect get well rhyme :) He will love it !
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Chris Green
Date: 6/12/2017 8:09:00 AM
Thanks so very much Lenna
Date: 6/8/2017 6:06:00 PM
This is great!! I hope Darren feels better soon and enjoys this :)
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Chris Green
Date: 6/12/2017 8:09:00 AM
Thanks so much Heidi
Date: 6/8/2017 5:45:00 PM
Beautiful...Darren will love it.
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Chris Green
Date: 6/12/2017 8:08:00 AM
Thanks Tim
Date: 6/8/2017 5:44:00 PM
This is so clever.
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Chris Green
Date: 6/12/2017 8:08:00 AM
Thanks Dale
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