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I Told the Sun - For Darren White

I told the sun – for Darren White I told the sun who told the sky who told the clouds and made them cry the rain drops told a bumble bee who told a rose who told a tree the tree then told a butterfly who told a bluebird flying high who told the stars who told the moon Now we all say please get well soon Hoping you feel better soon Darren

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Joanna Daniel

Date: 6/24/2017 12:20:00 AM

This is beautiful, Chris, for a great person:) hope it makes him better:)

Chris Green
Date: 6/26/2017 8:34:00 AM

Thanks so very much Jo. I hope so too.

Arthur Vaso

Date: 6/20/2017 8:17:00 PM

Chris, all your writings are amazing, its hard to come up with different ways to say that, however this one, well knowing Darren, any poem that on top of being so well written has that much heart in it, is to me not just a beautiful poem, is a GREAT poem! :)

Chris Green
Date: 6/21/2017 8:27:00 AM

Oh...this poem. :) That'll teach me to read mail before comments. Thanks so much Arthur, I am thrilled you liked this one. Please, be my guest.

Ali Pran

Date: 6/17/2017 6:23:00 AM

WHAT a feelings for a friend! Pray for Darren. Get well soon.

Chris Green
Date: 6/19/2017 9:27:00 AM

Thanks so very much. I am happy you liked this one.

Sunlite Wanter

Date: 6/13/2017 6:05:00 PM

Don't know how I missed this precious poem. Get well, Darren.

Chris Green
Date: 6/14/2017 8:45:00 AM

Thank you Sunlite. I believe he is feeling much better.

Wilma Neels

Date: 6/13/2017 7:07:00 AM

Such a sweet write and it has that feeling of hope throughout. Loved it Chris. Hope Darren is feeling better.

Chris Green
Date: 6/13/2017 8:05:00 AM

Thank you so very much Wilma. I hope he is as well.

Lisa Ricci

Date: 6/12/2017 4:13:00 AM

Good Morning Chris. I for one second your thoughts and words. I found this beautiful. Yes, I hope he is feeling better. The meaning of friendship and blessing shine here in your entry. I hope all is well with you. Have a wonderful morning and day.

Chris Green
Date: 6/12/2017 8:11:00 AM

Thank you so very much Lisa.