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I Thought To Write a Poem On a Gristmill

I thought to write a poem on a gristmill. First I googled it, having never really heard that term before. The “grist” part had conjured up for me images of grisly scenes like in a horror movie in which all that remained of dead bodies was the ghastly gristle of victims killed most gruesomely, the parts of them ground up inside a mill! But no, a gristmill is nothing so sinister as that! “Grist” is just another word for grain (the grain for grinding into flour). A gristmill, therefore, is the name for the machine or for the building where the gristing is performed! Strange that I’d only heard it in my region called a mill. If the word “mill” denotes the place for the grinding, isn’t it redunant to add a word which also is as repugnant as the word “grist” seems to be? Or maybe it’s only I that find the word so ugly - ugly like the words gargle, gagging, maggots or mucus. Funny to think that since my ancestors likely worked in gristmills, my maiden name might have been “Gristmiller” and not Miller. I thought to write a poem on a gristmill, but ended up with this! June 2, 2018 for The Gristmill Poetry Contest of Craig Cornish

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Date: 6/6/2018 6:57:00 PM
AWESOME twist in response to the challenge. Bravo, Andrea. Hilarious and witty.
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Date: 6/6/2018 9:30:00 AM
Hello Andrea, i have never heard of the Gristmill either. Now that I know what it is...It reminds me of the timeI went to a farm in Chapworth to get oat flour my husband wanted to make bread from it.Have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 6/4/2018 5:06:00 PM
I enjoyed the humor of your write, Andrea, best of luck. John
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Date: 6/4/2018 7:55:00 AM
Oh so you were a miller, those of the same name i know of, are Gypsy's Andrea, anyhow i digress, i like your take on this poem, and as usual you create an enjoyable read.. i am desperate to try and finalise my own entry,, having i have so much respect for the sponsor. But its time which is my enemy,,
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Date: 6/4/2018 6:06:00 AM
Hi, Andrea. I too dislike the word Grist. it gives me the same image as it does for you. I like the word Mill much better and the word Miller. Yes! I too never know where my thoughts will lead when I am writing. Elaine
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Date: 6/3/2018 9:55:00 PM
An extraordinary composition. Yet I have not ventured to try. Like You I have also not heard the word. Love n Best wishes.
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Date: 6/3/2018 3:00:00 PM
LOL You certainly have a unique entry, Andrea, and I found your poem to be very amusing. Though I knew what a gristmill was, I had to look up your word "grisly" as I thought it might mean the same as grizzly. It doesn't and I've been using grizzly where it should have been grisly all my life. I'm sure Craig will enjoy your creative spin! Best wishes in the contest. Hugs, Carolyn
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 6/3/2018 4:17:00 PM
ha, but one thing, I am pretty sure he will not enjoy it!
Date: 6/3/2018 10:59:00 AM
with all the work and labor going on in this place, might as well call it' greasemill..' love your distinct take on this one, andie,, huggs
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Date: 6/3/2018 7:56:00 AM
Interesting take on the contest prompt, Andrea. I am still working on mine; we have several beautiful historic gristmills in our area.
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Date: 6/3/2018 7:46:00 AM
I love it :) xomo!
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Date: 6/3/2018 6:08:00 AM
What you ended up with was so much fun to read. I loved the creativity in how you approached the theme..no doubt a winning poem..well done Andrea.
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Date: 6/2/2018 9:42:00 PM
Have you never seen the movie "Gone With the Wind" There is a gristmill in the opening scene. What did you think that was? Thanks for the laugh! Andrea "Grist"miller. lol
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 6/3/2018 3:00:00 PM
Indeed, Andrea Gristmiller!

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