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I THINK THEREFORE I EXIST

FROM MY ROOFTOP GARDEN, 25 JANUARY 2017, MY PHOTO, ©

I Think Therefore I Exist

Just Musing 

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" I think therefore I exist" René Descartes, French philosopher 1596-1650

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I look up to the sky

Wondering if all I see is reality or an illusion

Although I doubt the very existence of things, still I think

Therefore, there is something that doubts: Me!


This leads me to the conclusion that I exist as a doubting being,

Otherwise, I would never be able to think

This is proof of my existence.


Now, if I, who is a part of the cosmos, am able to think,

Then the whole cosmos must possess the property of thinking as well

For

How could the part, me, possess qualities that the totality of things doesn't possess?


Impossible!


Therefore, there is something in the macrocosm that thinks,

This "something" is larger than I- the microcosm- and preexisted my being,

If it were not like this, I could not exist.


This "something" is the source of every being and the object of my thinking,

Thus it guides me and everything else to follow its unfolding plan:

The unity and coherence of the cosmic order to create life!


We may call this "something" by any name

I for one, call it "God" and bow before His everlasting wisdom

For HE is my God, the Reason of every reason!

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© Demetrios Trifiatis
      25 January 2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Manassian Avatar
January 26, 2017 at 1:37 PM
So proud to know you....so proud of the way you inquire and reason. You are amazing
Allison Avatar
January 26, 2017 at 12:21 PM
Excellent words my friend You are a wise wise man! I think this is one of your best poems I have read Demetrios and am adding it to my faves:-) hugs jan xx
Smith Avatar
January 25, 2017 at 9:17 PM
This is excellent my friend.
Alhemaidy Avatar
January 25, 2017 at 10:23 AM
Very enjoyed! Thanks for sharing :)
Trifiatis Avatar
January 25, 2017 at 11:21 AM
Thank you dear, Abdullah!
Gupta Avatar
January 25, 2017 at 8:42 AM
Was René Descartes so much inclusive? ... However, your argument seems sound ... Salute to your doubtless faith ...
Trifiatis Avatar
January 25, 2017 at 9:22 AM
No, my friend, Probir, he was not! What did you expect ? He lived only to be 54 years old! If he had lived to be my age, 72, certainly he would have reached the same conclusion! haha! Thank dear fiend! Yes, the argument is sound!
Horsman Avatar
January 25, 2017 at 6:36 AM
the creation is so vital, as is your poetry my friend.
Trifiatis Avatar
January 25, 2017 at 9:23 AM
So noble of you dear, harry! Thank you very much!
Andresen Avatar
January 25, 2017 at 4:41 AM
- You my friend, are one of the most influential philosopher here at the "Soup" - A truly wonderful poem .... 10/10 :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Trifiatis Avatar
January 25, 2017 at 5:56 AM
Thank youfor your precious visit and comment dearest, Anne-Lise! Hugs xx
Wolf Avatar
January 25, 2017 at 2:26 AM
What a marvelous mind you possess! The Hermetic principles, first law, states all is mind. The Universe is mental! As hard as it can be to fathom, it is a truth and immutable! Excellent musing mate!
Trifiatis Avatar
January 25, 2017 at 5:53 AM
Thank you for your appreciation and generous praise dear, White Wolf!
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