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I Think That I Shall Never See...

.A Single Sequoia Firm and tall Feeds on the love And kindnesses Of other nature lovers Was supported, cultivated Becoming a tower against the horizon Waxing green leaves, which it deposits later as gifts, Among the earth dwellers, it embraced all under its canopy Time passed and with it grew wisdom and purity of thought Soon; sweet songs were sung by the tree dwellers, nourishing it abundantly It was fruitful in return, gladly sharing all its color and splendor with other nature Suddenly an alto fell in with the soprano pitched songbirds, distracting it immensely The alto pecked, vibrating the core, with its obsidian bill, drilling, forever drumming, Night and day, night and day, a steady pecking, of a woodpecker Singing in a foreign soup song language Not caring Whatsoever That it drained The tree’s spirit Trying to shoo it, The tree branched. Feverishly it tossed, Left to right, beating. Dropping all its fauna Onto the forest floor.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 8/13/2010 7:20:00 AM
I am feeling the urge to go back and read poetry from earlier writing of my favorite poets today and this is the one I opened of yours Sandra. I truly enjoyed reading it today and it is one of your best. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/2/2009 1:49:00 PM
Looks like a Contest submission to me LOL...Oh What a Shape I'm in Concrete verse contest! Light & Love
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Date: 7/10/2009 4:00:00 PM
Joyce Kilmer was wrong! I can plainly see that YOU have made a tree: Timberrrrrr. I really fell for this poem. Excellent. Thanks for your comment. Always, Will
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Date: 5/28/2009 10:25:00 AM
I love it great imagination and thanx for the love
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Date: 5/11/2009 6:36:00 PM
oh this is brilliant! In word and image... just stunning.
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Date: 4/29/2009 10:53:00 AM
good!! love the form!! I felt this one!!
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Date: 4/29/2009 10:01:00 AM
I loved this poem. I think I might try to meet a poem that stands firm like concrete. Allan Granstrom
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Date: 4/26/2009 6:04:00 AM
"I think that I shall never see/a poem as lovely as a tree/a tree whose hungry mouth is pressed/against the earth's sweet flowing breast..." Ah, I still remember those lines from way back in high school. If you are trying to rival the imagery of that original poem with yours, Sandra, I think you succeeded, your soul as a nature lover is shining through in this work. Regards, Fred
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Date: 4/26/2009 12:11:00 AM
art all the way until the last line. i am in awe
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Date: 4/25/2009 12:12:00 PM
not being from that part of the country i have never seen one. but i pray that i someday will. great work. john h loving iii
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Date: 4/24/2009 6:43:00 PM
What an image, Alexandra! Both in form and in content. How sad the woodpecker drained the tree of its life. (I think I know where this is coming from.) Wish I could help revive the tree in all its glory! Love, Carolyn
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