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I Stroll Through the Pine Forest

I stroll through the pine forest — an early Christmas present. Holly berries still green I pause and take pictures As a bee keeps eyes on me. The possible chill Releases the humidity — Imagine this: I will take the slight dip In my garden’s luminosity. 8/24/2018

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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/27/2018 8:50:00 PM
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Such vivid images, even were they not reversible. Bravo, Kim. Excellent. Best wishes, Gershon
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/27/2018 10:09:00 PM
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Thank you, my friend!
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John Gondolf
Date: 8/27/2018 5:03:00 PM
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I love this imagery of walking through the forest, Heidi, I felt like I was there. Best of luck. John
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/27/2018 5:04:00 PM
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Thanks, John. Hugs...Kim
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Paul Callus
Date: 8/25/2018 9:14:00 AM
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Two-way traffic...beautiful both ways, Kim! Regards // paul
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/25/2018 9:17:00 AM
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Thank you, dear friend!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/24/2018 11:37:00 PM
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You made it look "do-able" Kim, I have to say this takes my breath away. I had read others' and did not "get" it, I got it now, and you were an excellent teacher. Good luck in the contest, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/25/2018 7:13:00 AM
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Thanks so much, Caren! xx
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Robertina B.
Date: 8/24/2018 10:39:00 PM
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An absolutely beautiful free verse, Kim.. Perfectly penned!! Outstanding imagery.. Many blessings!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/25/2018 7:14:00 AM
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Thank you, Robertina! The garden I belong to is an inspiration!
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Susan Ashley
Date: 8/24/2018 9:16:00 PM
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Any way you read this, this is beautiful Kim. Just so lovely! Best wishes for a win! ~Susan
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/24/2018 9:31:00 PM
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Thank you, my friend!
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Chris Green
Date: 8/24/2018 4:36:00 PM
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Wow!!! That was really well done Kim. You made something I know is extremely hard to do look so easy. Bravo.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/24/2018 4:45:00 PM
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Thank you, Chris :):)

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