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I Stand Not Alone

I stand not alone, but grouped as ten Here comes that big black ball again I'm down, but not dead Pulled up by my head It's just not easy for a bowling pin!

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Warren Doll

Date: 7/30/2018 9:10:00 AM

Great limerick, Pat. I enjoyed it very much.

Pat Adams
Date: 7/30/2018 11:06:00 PM

Thank you Warren, I'm glad you liked it!......Patrick

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/30/2018 7:43:00 AM

Love this! I didn’t guess the bowling pin!

Pat Adams
Date: 7/30/2018 11:05:00 PM

Sometimes I'm sneaky that way!...........80)

Sunlite Wanter

Date: 7/29/2018 5:06:00 PM

You oughta be on the stage so everyone could share my laugh.

Pat Adams
Date: 7/30/2018 11:05:00 PM

What a nice thing to say!.....Thank you!!............Pat

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 7/29/2018 2:26:00 PM

Wow, neat idea to imagine it from the pin's perspective! (btw, I've posted a 'thank you' to my poetrysoup pals and since you're one of them I hope you take a look!)

Pat Adams
Date: 7/29/2018 4:01:00 PM

Thank you Michelle. I'll do that now and then it's off to work!...........Patrick

Jan Allison

Date: 7/28/2018 4:12:00 PM

Very clever Pat, not been bowling for many years:-) hugs jan xx

Pat Adams
Date: 7/29/2018 3:59:00 PM

Thanks Jan. It's been several years for me too. They had two where we live, but one allowed smoking (It went out) and the other was (and is) way too high!

Line Gauthier

Date: 7/28/2018 4:10:00 PM

Indeed not easy. Well done, Pat.

Pat Adams
Date: 7/29/2018 3:56:00 PM

Thank you Line! I'm about to start my 3rd "12" at work but at least I'll have a couple of days off after that. Rain is coming in so I'll have to mow my lawn when I get home and then "PASS OUT!!!!"..........80)