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I Speak Through My Soul To Yours

Precious little fawn; How you touch my very soul; Step not onto that deadly asphalt. Wicked is the chemical asphalt; Go back, into the woods, tiny fawn. You are such a precious soul. From my soul to your bright soul; Humans have created that lethal asphalt; Return and celebrate your family, little fawn. I always speak to fawns with my soul; Their enemy, is the interstate’s asphalt.

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Jack Ellison

Date: 7/9/2018 1:31:00 PM

Very inspiring, a brilliant way to tell us of these adorable creatures! Nicely done! XOX

Fj Thomas

Date: 4/11/2018 3:36:00 PM

So very true ML. Wishing you the best my friend.

Cynthia Jones

Date: 11/5/2017 6:56:00 AM

It's going to turn around and bite us. Great write you have yourself here M.L. *S* Cynthia

Leon Enriquez

Date: 10/26/2017 10:27:00 AM

Dear ML Kiser: A lovely write. Leon

Kelly Deschler

Date: 9/30/2017 1:07:00 PM

Too often the ways of man seem to destroy nature's most precious creatures... A tender and beautiful poem, M.L., this tugs at my heart in many different ways... Nicely done!

Chuck Melugin

Date: 9/18/2017 5:18:00 PM

Dear M.L., A beautiful poetic respect of animal life. You are a great writer! My best, chuck

Silent One

Date: 9/6/2017 11:51:00 AM

Wow.. excellent..

Pipping Stars

Date: 9/3/2017 10:39:00 AM

what cat took my tongue ... awesome ....

Anna Hopper

Date: 8/14/2017 6:10:00 AM

Awe, this is so sweet and special. I have a perfect little spotted fawn pictured. I must agree with you... and it is so sad.

M. L. Kiser
Date: 8/16/2017 9:02:00 AM

Thank you, Anna.

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 8/14/2017 2:55:00 AM

This is an excellent post. Thanks for bringing attention to asphalt

M. L. Kiser
Date: 8/16/2017 9:02:00 AM

Thank you for reading and commenting.

Indiana Shaw

Date: 8/12/2017 9:35:00 AM

We built the asphalt roads to our world - Without little consequence of others - Little do we know each fawn killed by cars - Are our own spiritual sister's or brother's - Indiana x x x

M. L. Kiser
Date: 8/16/2017 9:03:00 AM

I realize that we can't know everything and that much of our endeavors do harm. Sadly, we sometimes need to learn that fact afterwards. Glad that you stopped by to read and comment and thanks so much, Indiana.

Matthew Anish

Date: 8/12/2017 8:58:00 AM

Nice commentary on one of God's creatures! I have belonged to the National Wildlife Federation for many years. Yes NYC summers are hot. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

M. L. Kiser
Date: 8/16/2017 9:04:00 AM

Thank you, Matthew.

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 8/12/2017 5:44:00 AM

Excellent. Very touching write. Enjoyed reading it.

M. L. Kiser
Date: 8/16/2017 9:04:00 AM

Many Thanks, Ravi.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/12/2017 1:58:00 AM

Every soul is precious and even though we don't speak the same language I think mentally they can feel when we have compassion for them. This is beautiful M. L.: )

Lewis Raynes

Date: 8/11/2017 9:56:00 PM

Beautiful, I'd never ever thought like this. Great write

M. L. Kiser
Date: 8/11/2017 10:19:00 PM

Thank you very much.

Vicki Acquah

Date: 8/11/2017 9:52:00 PM

touching right off the bat!

M. L. Kiser
Date: 8/11/2017 10:19:00 PM

Thank you very much; I appreciate the comments.

Harry Horsman

Date: 8/11/2017 5:43:00 PM

love this wonderful and caring poem.

M. L. Kiser
Date: 8/11/2017 8:01:00 PM

Thank you, Harry.

Eve Roper

Date: 8/10/2017 5:15:00 PM

This is very good, M.L., you just described so very well and touched my heart.. ~*

M. L. Kiser
Date: 8/11/2017 8:02:00 PM

I'm glad, Eve and thanks.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/10/2017 2:56:00 PM

- A soft, touching and lovely poem M.L. - A beautiful soul and heart - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

M. L. Kiser
Date: 8/11/2017 8:02:00 PM

Thanks so much.

Heidi Sands

Date: 8/10/2017 7:50:00 AM

This poem is very special. M.L. I see the deer here too, with all the wildlife. This writing reaches me :)

M. L. Kiser
Date: 8/11/2017 8:02:00 PM

I'm glad, Heidi and I appreciate the comments. Thanks.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 8/10/2017 6:51:00 AM

A pleasure to read about your love of nature and what humans do to harm. Good work MLK!

M. L. Kiser
Date: 8/11/2017 8:03:00 PM

Thank you.

Jan Allison

Date: 8/10/2017 4:49:00 AM

I'm pleased we have no deer roaming free I'd hate to see one out on our roads as many of them are de restricted and the poor animal would stand no chance. A very touching poem ML:-) hugs jan xx

M. L. Kiser
Date: 8/11/2017 8:04:00 PM

Yes, I hate to see that, as well and I always take precautions when I see them, but sometimes they do run out in front of vehicles and other people don't necessarily pull off or stop for them. Glad you stopped by again and thanks.

Roy Pett

Date: 8/10/2017 3:18:00 AM

Excellent Tritina M.L. kiser, Such a sad reality that we humans put beautiful creatures in so much danger, well written enjoyed.

M. L. Kiser
Date: 8/10/2017 3:49:00 AM

Appreciate the comments, Roy; thanks again.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 8/10/2017 2:10:00 AM

The only way to speak to these adorable creatures my dearest M.L.Kiser! Inspiring!

M. L. Kiser
Date: 8/10/2017 3:48:00 AM

Thanks, Demetrios.