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I Smiled When I Saw Her That Date

I smiled when I saw her that date

I smiled when I saw her that date
she came to me every night 
for in that moment I met my fate 
six months latter became my mate 

on that day my life became new 
walked out my dream into life 
she became all I ever knew
the day she became my wife

it has now been 45 years
Since the day we first met in my dream
She has made my life so special
She was a true fairy tale princess

she came to me every night 
I smiled when I saw her that date

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Date: 10/13/2020 10:19:00 AM
what a charming love story, Many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/13/2020 6:21:00 AM
Jake, I really enjoyed this poem. A genuine love story. Unfortunately the format was off or this would have placed higher. Congratulations on your placement. All the best...Charlie
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