I Sing To Eternity

To an unmet friend:


You see the mortal world
and for you man is machine,
little more than a device
for the vagaries of evolution.
Faith is illusion, hope lacks
weight-- and love? Can love
be other than mere sex,
nature's sole mandate?

And your science now tells
you: what can I ever know?
All is quantum topsy-turvy,
mother nature being part
whore, part illusionist....
Your thinking breaks all
down to little pieces,
and nothing matters
as matter is all while 
science the only god
left for us to worship.

And we are nothing,
not even dreams 
anymore, just bits
and pieces to be
examined, classified,
and then ignored--
for science is all,
and faith but a 
refuge for fools.

You are honest,
I know-- you see
yourself as just
another machine,
destined for decay.
then destruction--
your sentience but 
a cruel joke told
yet again-- and
no one laughs.

You and I,
we breathe,
we think,
we live, but
you would stop 
at death while
I begin there....

I sing to the Eternal:
quell not my songs
as they rise above
the sad despair born 
of your vacant world
and follow myriad stars
streaming their wondrous
light in the vast dead-cold 
Universe....

I sing to Eternity,
I sing to my Soul.




[poet's note: Under my pen name, Nolo Segundo, I used this as both the title and the opening poem in my first book,  'The Enormity of Existence' because I think of this poem as coming out of something I experienced in 1971 as a 24 year old when I almost drowned in the Winooski River in Vermont. I was like that 'unmet friend' before I went into that river: certain of my nihilism, believing only matter was real--no God, no soul, no meaning to life. For 1/2 a century I've had more questions than answers, but I do know that what we perceive as 'reality'--with our limited senses and limited intellects-- is not 'Reality'....]
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mysore Avatar
July 8, 2024 at 10:09 PM
poet's note made me read the poem again,'vacant world' it is. beautiful write. Congratulations. Happy writing.
Carber Avatar
July 9, 2024 at 5:05 AM
Thank you very much--I suppose I should have mentioned in the note that the book is published by Cyberwit.net under my pen name, 'Nolo Segundo'.
Alex Avatar
December 27, 2022 at 8:48 PM
Coming back to congratulate you again. Congratulations!
Carber Avatar
December 28, 2022 at 2:10 PM
Thank you C.A., and may you have a most blessed 2023!
Gaul Avatar
November 29, 2021 at 1:43 PM
A deserving placement, spoken from the soul. Congratulations.
Carber Avatar
November 29, 2021 at 3:51 PM
Thanks Greg-- indeed it was, from the soul
Agustin Avatar
November 22, 2021 at 8:45 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... so delighted am I with your final lines: "I sing to Eternity, I sing to my Soul." God bless you.
Carber Avatar
November 29, 2021 at 3:50 PM
Thanks Beata, and may you go with God always...
Liguori Avatar
November 21, 2021 at 9:37 AM
So much wisdom! Congrats on your poem, insightful and delightful read. Robert
Carber Avatar
November 21, 2021 at 4:04 PM
Thank you Robert-- whatever 'wisdom' I have was earned the hard way, a very hard way, but I am grateful for it every day....
Gaul Avatar
November 20, 2021 at 8:18 AM
Philosophically poking at the edges of existence in this vast universe. Pointing to contradictions, blunted by reason. Well told, well penned. Congrats on your high placement.
Carber Avatar
November 21, 2021 at 4:03 PM
Thanks Greg--I love logic, 'reason' but what I've experienced tells me our reasoning abilities are limited by our senses and our triple digit I.Q.'s pale when the 'Mystery' is encountered...or so I have found.
Alex Avatar
November 20, 2021 at 6:22 AM
If you can sing it to an unknown friend, you are truly a poet. Congratulations!
Carber Avatar
November 21, 2021 at 3:58 PM
Thank you-- though I use 'sing' in a metaphorical sense as I am a pretty bad singer!
Merryman Avatar
May 23, 2021 at 5:32 PM
You are right in that the Eternal is what's important! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M
Carber Avatar
May 26, 2021 at 9:41 AM
Thanks Kim!
Gaul Avatar
May 7, 2020 at 3:40 PM
L.J., your passion is pervasive. Your intellect is screaming for survival. And for hope. Seems our world leaves you with awkward binary choices. I empathize with your quest and share your quest. I have no answers, only more questions. From your poetry, I sense you are a good soul. You may be the real winner. Namaste.
Carber Avatar
May 8, 2020 at 2:43 PM
I get it Greg; been shown a few things but have far more ?'s. As for my soul--it's broken like every soul is, i.e., imperfect, falling short of that Light that we all really do seek, even if we don't know it. But God's been there so far--so fingers crossed!
Watt Avatar
May 7, 2020 at 11:02 AM
I like your song, LJ. A thoughtful write on the distinctions between the scientific and spiritual approaches to discovering the meaning of life. Congrats on your win today ~ John
Carber Avatar
May 7, 2020 at 1:18 PM
Thanks John-- I hope it doesn't seem I'm disparaging science [which has kept me alive and walking, literally!] But science by definition can only --and should only--be concerned with the material world-- unlike God, science is neutral and can be used to destroy life as easily as it can be to save life.
Gaul Avatar
April 7, 2020 at 11:56 AM
A deep insight into your inner spirit and I think a positive view of consciousness as a surviving piece, a prescription for eternal spirituality, excellent work. We do think similar things, if I read you properly. Congratulations and thanks for noting my work as well. GG
Carber Avatar
May 7, 2020 at 1:19 PM
Forgive me Greg, I missed this before-- but I am deeply appreciative when a poet like yourself showers kind words on one of my wayward children!
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 27, 2019 at 9:02 PM
It appears as if you have knowledge of the here after and have accessed its boundaries L.J. Congratulations on your win with this unique tribute. xxoo
Carber Avatar
September 28, 2019 at 10:35 AM
Thank you--and you've very perceptive, Connie. Almost 50 years ago I almost drowned in a Vermont river and had what is now called an NDE:I went into that river as an agnostic certain in my unbelief;I came out knowing I have a consciousness that exists always, beyond time itself even. Both my reading & conversations with many folks have shown me that paranormal events are far more common than many realize.
Dietrich Avatar
September 27, 2019 at 7:50 PM
This was very different from the other entries. Very evocative. I enjoyed your entry, and congrats on the win.
Carber Avatar
September 28, 2019 at 10:38 AM
Thanks Andrea, you're very kind!
Roper Avatar
September 27, 2019 at 6:26 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest with this wonderful tribute poem! Hugs Eve
Carber Avatar
September 28, 2019 at 10:39 AM
Thank you, my friend!
La France Avatar
September 27, 2019 at 2:59 PM
LJ congratulations on your win in the contest with this wonderful write!
Carber Avatar
September 28, 2019 at 10:40 AM
Thank you, Dear Heart, much appreciated!
Andresen Avatar
September 27, 2019 at 7:11 AM
- Friendship is the wine of life ... lovely win poems, congratulations L.J. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Carber Avatar
September 27, 2019 at 11:32 AM
It is indeed! Thank you
May Avatar
September 27, 2019 at 6:15 AM
Congratulations on your placement
Carber Avatar
September 27, 2019 at 11:33 AM
Thank you, I am honered
One Avatar
August 18, 2019 at 2:49 PM
Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
Carber Avatar
September 27, 2019 at 11:34 AM
Sorry, Silent One, somehow I overlooked thanking you earlier.
Chiri Avatar
June 7, 2019 at 8:56 PM
Congrats on your win!
Carber Avatar
June 7, 2019 at 10:15 PM
Thank you, Brenda
Mcgee Avatar
June 7, 2019 at 7:35 PM
I loved where you took this poem. So beautiful. And congrats on your #1. Thanks. Jeanne
Carber Avatar
June 7, 2019 at 10:16 PM
Thanks Jeanne, I appreciate it.
Marcum Wong Avatar
June 7, 2019 at 5:41 PM
We are so much more than our earthly bodies. You have expressed this so beautifully in this First Place winning poem M.J. Congratulations on your deserving honor! : ) xxoo
Carber Avatar
June 7, 2019 at 10:17 PM
Thank you Connie-- more and more I seem to be singing this song....
Pandit Avatar
June 7, 2019 at 2:47 PM
Congrats on your #1 win L.J...so much to ponder here..so well done.
Carber Avatar
June 7, 2019 at 10:18 PM
Thank you Vijay-- very much appreciated.
Gauthier Avatar
September 23, 2018 at 11:49 PM
Congrats on your win, LJ, with this deep poem.
Carber Avatar
September 24, 2018 at 8:25 AM
Thank you Line, much appreciated
Roper Avatar
September 23, 2018 at 4:23 PM
Congratulations on you win ...Eve
Carber Avatar
September 24, 2018 at 8:25 AM
Thanks Eve
Brewer Avatar
September 23, 2018 at 2:49 PM
As you know, I am with you in this lucid, and I would hope persuasive rejection of materialism, and affirmation of the human spirit. Well wielded sword Len.
Carber Avatar
September 24, 2018 at 8:30 AM
Thanks Geoff-- I wonder if we're in a minority here at soup, as we seem to be amongst the intelligencia generally it seems: what puzzles me is why so many choose to believe in nihilism over transcendence when there has been substantial experiential testimony for the latter over the millennia?
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