Jan Allison Poet Blank verse

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I Simply Can'T Make Up My Mind

I think that I may be indecisive.
But now I’m not really quite sure

I can’t seem to make up my mind
I've never had this problem before

I used to see everything in black and white
Now I can’t decide and nothing is right

I was going to buy some venison
But decided it was a little deer

Maybe I’ll get some new glasses
So my clouded judgement is clear

26th April 2015

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Maurice Yvonne April 29, 2015 at 2:24 PM This one is an eleven seven!!!! I wish I had super fav list!!!! A Huge Super Fav!!!! Jan Allison April 29, 2015 at 2:30 PM ha ha ha - i already have had enough stick on a blog today today about my poems being on the 'best new' poems list - I can't help it if people favourite my poems can I!!! Hugs Jan xx

Bl Devnath April 27, 2015 at 4:05 PM Beautiful funny thoughts beautifully worded. i think a baby bottle of feeding is needed to clear confusion, it may help. Lol! it's a very nice poem. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl Jan Allison April 27, 2015 at 4:07 PM LOL think I will stick to my cup of tea - am not reverting to childhood ways JUST yet lol:-) Hugs jan xx

D. C. April 26, 2015 at 7:02 PM There is something in this reading That everyone can identify with. Jan Allison April 27, 2015 at 12:58 AM Thanks D C :-) Hugs Jan x

James Fraser April 26, 2015 at 4:01 PM Love the cliche's Jan, nice one, hugs//James xx Jan Allison April 26, 2015 at 4:03 PM Thanks James:-) Hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen April 26, 2015 at 2:18 PM - I fell in love ..... the sweet deep thinking guy :))) - A great write ..... you are no black / white person .... for me you are the rainbow, dear Jan ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Jan Allison April 26, 2015 at 2:36 PM aww thank you Anne Lise if my poems can brighten up someone's day than it is well worth it:-) Hugs jan xx

Tim Smith April 26, 2015 at 10:38 AM This is great Jan....my friends would make venison chili.... quite delicious....lovely Tim Jan Allison April 26, 2015 at 11:16 AM mmm sounds good minus the venison lol:-) Hugs Jan xx

Nandita Das April 26, 2015 at 7:34 AM I thought this was about me. Indecisive like Hamlet. Brilliant write. Cute pic. #7 Nandita Das April 26, 2015 at 9:10 AM So glad to hear that. Makes me so verrrrrrrrry happy. Thanks. Jan Allison April 26, 2015 at 7:36 AM LOL I started to write this at school on Tuesday and left my notepad there - doh. I am still smiling from your wonderful poem - my hubby loved it - you have simply made my week! Hugs Jan xx

Charmaine Chircop April 26, 2015 at 7:06 AM I really love the picture and the poem dear Jan .Re yr comment on mine ...I do wish Darren will get back and you two can collab again dear.I hate it when we loose souper friends. Jan Allison April 26, 2015 at 7:10 AM I hope and pray I hear from the family soon but I will never give up on my friendship he means the world to me - sent him a card and present this week as I think his birthday is near - hope it brightens his day:-)