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I Simply Can'T Make Up My Mind

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I think that I may be indecisive. But now I’m not really quite sure I can’t seem to make up my mind I've never had this problem before I used to see everything in black and white Now I can’t decide and nothing is right I was going to buy some venison But decided it was a little deer Maybe I’ll get some new glasses So my clouded judgement is clear 26th April 2015

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Maurice Yvonne

Date: 4/29/2015 2:24:00 PM

This one is an eleven seven!!!! I wish I had super fav list!!!! A Huge Super Fav!!!!

Jan Allison
Date: 4/29/2015 2:30:00 PM

ha ha ha - i already have had enough stick on a blog today today about my poems being on the 'best new' poems list - I can't help it if people favourite my poems can I!!! Hugs Jan xx

Bl Devnath

Date: 4/27/2015 4:05:00 PM

Beautiful funny thoughts beautifully worded. i think a baby bottle of feeding is needed to clear confusion, it may help. Lol! it's a very nice poem. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl

Jan Allison
Date: 4/27/2015 4:07:00 PM

LOL think I will stick to my cup of tea - am not reverting to childhood ways JUST yet lol:-) Hugs jan xx

D. C.

Date: 4/26/2015 7:02:00 PM

There is something in this reading That everyone can identify with.

Jan Allison
Date: 4/27/2015 12:58:00 AM

Thanks D C :-) Hugs Jan x

James Fraser

Date: 4/26/2015 4:01:00 PM

Love the cliche's Jan, nice one, hugs//James xx

Jan Allison
Date: 4/26/2015 4:03:00 PM

Thanks James:-) Hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/26/2015 2:18:00 PM

- I fell in love ..... the sweet deep thinking guy :))) - A great write ..... you are no black / white person .... for me you are the rainbow, dear Jan ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison
Date: 4/26/2015 2:36:00 PM

aww thank you Anne Lise if my poems can brighten up someone's day than it is well worth it:-) Hugs jan xx

Tim Smith

Date: 4/26/2015 10:38:00 AM

This is great Jan....my friends would make venison chili.... quite delicious....lovely Tim

Jan Allison
Date: 4/26/2015 11:16:00 AM

mmm sounds good minus the venison lol:-) Hugs Jan xx

Nandita Das

Date: 4/26/2015 7:34:00 AM

I thought this was about me. Indecisive like Hamlet. Brilliant write. Cute pic. #7

Nandita Das
Date: 4/26/2015 9:10:00 AM

So glad to hear that. Makes me so verrrrrrrrry happy. Thanks.

Jan Allison
Date: 4/26/2015 7:36:00 AM

LOL I started to write this at school on Tuesday and left my notepad there - doh. I am still smiling from your wonderful poem - my hubby loved it - you have simply made my week! Hugs Jan xx

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 4/26/2015 7:06:00 AM

I really love the picture and the poem dear Jan .Re yr comment on mine ...I do wish Darren will get back and you two can collab again dear.I hate it when we loose souper friends.

Jan Allison
Date: 4/26/2015 7:10:00 AM

I hope and pray I hear from the family soon but I will never give up on my friendship he means the world to me - sent him a card and present this week as I think his birthday is near - hope it brightens his day:-)