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I Shouldn'T Have Looked Into You

I still remember the day -
first time she looked into me.
She was quite a beguiling beauty
enriched with miracles of nature.
Within a single look, a connection 
was developed between us
as I was quite a charmer myself.
I enjoyed her company very much
as she frolicked in front of me
for hours with a blink of an interval
every now and then.
She was at the prime of her youth
and she knew how to draw attention
as if that was her only joy
to be the center of attraction.
She was always seeking opportunities
to exhibit her lovely self.
Soirees and celebrations were her life.
Soon after marriage 
and giving birth to three children,
she drastically changed.
Most of the time she was worried
about getting old, 
afraid of losing her luster
and she blamed me for it.
Her eyes would widen with rage
and dissatisfaction as she looked at me.
She started to spend a lot of money,
effort and time to regain 
her youthful look with cosmetics.
Even the layers of make-up
didn't make her happy.
Her obsession to be eternally young 
made her do a lot of strange things.
By the time she was fifty,
she lost her sanity.
One day out of disgust
she thwacked me down the wall.
Years of loyal service
and this is how she paid me back
by shattering me into pieces.
You see being a mirror,
I was only doing my job
by projecting her true reflection.
I'm not good with illusions at all.
It was her who couldn't help herself
accepting reality and nature's course.
Before I was dumped in the garbage,
her last words to me were -
"I shouldn't have looked into you."


04/21/2018

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Date: 6/27/2017 12:23:00 PM
wow, a GREAT character study of a vain woman, Afzal. I relate a tiny bit to her. it's terrible to use our youth. but not so far as to go crazy from it. Is it for "create a character" contest. NICE job.
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Date: 6/28/2017 12:03:00 AM
Thank you for the lovely feedback, Andrea. It's not for any contest but is inspired by Mystic's contest by the same name.
Date: 6/26/2017 1:49:00 AM
" Mirror, Mirror on the wall...". You really had me till the end, I thought you were talking yourself up, you charmer. A very clever play on words and the story, I really enjoyed it...Maria
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Maria Williams
Date: 6/27/2017 2:20:00 AM
Thank you Afzal... Maria
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Date: 6/26/2017 4:40:00 AM
I'm really glad you enjoyed it Maria. I enjoy your poems very much as well :~)

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