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I shall never see you again

you are aware of it even I'm aware of it that parallel are going to be our ways we might never see each other again but getting away from me,my thoughts are in which you will forever remain your presence was like a fountain which is full of love rather than rain your absence is going to give me a tremendous pain forever which is going to remain 1 year later the summer is coming,the summer is going but the season of sadness is never seem to be get finish all the happiness which were previously in my life have gone but there's one grief which never seem to postpone these eyes have cried for you these eyes remain awaken all night waiting for you I just wanted to remind you that where ever you go never forget that somebody is living for you where ever you go remain safe because somebody is living for you that's only what my heart wants the terrors of forgeting you are which always haunts I wanted to know that whether you are safe or not but a wise guy told me that don t ask questions you don t wanted to know the answers to

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Date: 12/14/2017 11:51:00 AM
Nice composition, but what to do? That's life. Yet hope for the best. You may meet her again somewhere someday. Be careful of grammar.You should write One instead of 1. best wishes
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Date: 8/22/2017 10:52:00 PM
This is wonderful! I felt this entire poem, i even personally related to this at one point in my life. Im so glad i read this one! Keep up your great work! -Amanda
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Date: 7/16/2017 6:12:00 AM
Beautifully written. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
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Date: 7/10/2017 11:12:00 AM
Simply beautiful. Well played title, it grabbed me immediately
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Date: 7/7/2017 1:51:00 PM
...........simply amazing!!! that was interesting from the title till the very end. its a beautiful sad piece written with so much heart.. thank you for this :) :)
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Date: 6/26/2017 7:50:00 AM
Your ability to express your thoughts is obvious if not a little hard to understand for the reasons others have talked about. Writing is a process, it takes time and talent. To get a feel for flow, try reading my poem "Fears", you may like it.
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Date: 6/21/2017 6:45:00 AM
Beautiful and heart felt, your emotions are truly understandable. I agree with the others who have commented on your grammar and structure, it takes time, however, I believe you will get there. One thing to remember, if you're writing a number down, write it in word form, for example: 1 = one. Keep up the good work. Regards Kay
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Date: 6/19/2017 1:24:00 PM
I have grammar problems too. I use spell check and the ensiclapedea. It helps. I like this. I understand it because I know how you feel. I have walked in your shoes for 25 year's. I am 35 turning 36 in July. It took me three big relationships to figure things out. I promise you things will get better if they haven't yet. I hope you the best. Thank you for commenting on my work. I am grateful.
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Date: 6/18/2017 4:02:00 PM
Great write filled with emotion. Losing someone for whatever reason is always hard to deal with. But of you keep the memory alive within your heart and soul, within time things get easier to bear!
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Date: 6/18/2017 2:55:00 PM
Good poem written here Faraz. You should learn how to better construct your sentences though. With a better effort of that, I honestly believe that you can become a much better poet. I understand what you are trying to say in this poem.
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Date: 6/18/2017 10:18:00 AM
I DONT KNOW WHAT TO SAY. I UNDERSTAND ALL YOUR FEELINGS AND EMOTIONS BUT THEY SEEM TO JUST SPILL OUT...UNCONTROLLABLY. I THINK YOU WOULD BENEFIT FROM 'GRAMMARLY' IT WILL TEACH YOU HOW TO LAY OUT YOUR WORDS SO THEY TELL THE READER HOW TO READ YOUR BEAUTIFUL HEARTFELT WORDS. TRY IT AND AFTER LET ME KNOW AND I WILL RE READ FOR YOU AND GIVE YOU AN HONEST OPINION. MUCH LOVE OKANAGANBELL
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Date: 6/18/2017 3:17:00 AM
A beautiful write and clearly very honest. There is a manner in which the depiction of your feelings as words makes me almost reminiscent of a time where i struggled like you, however the past is now behind me, and very soon it will be behind you as well. Persevere, and do not stop writing. Stay strong :) hugs -Niyomi
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Date: 6/17/2017 11:29:00 PM
"I shall never see you again" beautiful true but yet in true in the after life all that matters is that we make it threw! I welcome and appreciate your verse, very sweet to the heart and soul --James Edward Lee Sr
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Date: 6/17/2017 5:16:00 PM
Beautiful but sad. I loved it. Please work on the use of English words a bit though. ??
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Date: 6/17/2017 3:59:00 AM
Lovely depiction Faraz, Way to go! Good Luck, and m glad I came through your poems.
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Date: 6/16/2017 12:54:00 PM
the sentiment about the horror of forgetting is not what everyone recognizes. Kudos!
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Date: 6/16/2017 12:39:00 PM
good one!Its tough dealing with such strong feelings but time settles everything.hope things get better.have a great day!
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Date: 6/16/2017 12:00:00 PM
I love the sentiment you express in this poem. Nice work!
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Date: 6/16/2017 11:23:00 AM
so true, we sometimes lose in love but selfishly we really want the other person to be miserable still loving us. Good write.
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Date: 6/15/2017 11:08:00 PM
Your pain is evident in your poem. I'm sorry for your loss. I think you are an English language learner from the way you write. Here is some help: Look up the spelling for happiness. "woken" is not the right word - I think you want "I'm awake all night" or "My eyes are open all night" I think you want an apostrophe on "That's" Keep working on this.It could be awesome
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Date: 6/15/2017 4:06:00 PM
you asked for my honest opinion, so while it is a nice poem, you could've written it better. some of the word choices could've been changed, or the order of words in the sentence. also, use apostrophes instead of spaces in words such as "I'm". other than that, its very beautiful, although sad.
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Date: 6/14/2017 3:08:00 PM
Love the sad write. I use the word fountain in a few of my poems :)
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Date: 6/14/2017 9:19:00 AM
VERY NICE POEM
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Date: 6/14/2017 1:38:00 AM
This is a sad heart tugging write, Faraz, absolutely beautiful:) your thoughts are wonderful, just be a little more careful with your grammar:)
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Date: 6/14/2017 12:30:00 AM
You have a great talent for expression Faraz and it shows through words with genuineness. Don't fret just let the Universe takes it's course and don't be afraid that you will forget, a nice write which I imagine will be difficult as English is not your first language. Well done...Maria
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