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I Shall Collaborate With You - Why

Clouds weep sending down vapour to mother earth trying to quench the fires of self destruction beheld, time lost to a cruel master igniting lines, fused in delusion Dreams cast forth in fervent storms ideals left, now an uncontrollable rage mountains moved, flattened by stupidity rivers ruined, overflown with blood and guts Tonight the lonely wolf howls at an empty moon a barren heart, tossed with a lust for greed beating down a trodden path, barely holding on where serpents slip on up through the grass Lay down the swords of battles gone awry Arise with the sparrows or alone we shall die

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Date: 11/13/2017 6:44:00 AM
Great collaboration about cruelty of death, Tim and Seren:) congratulations on POTD:)
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Date: 11/11/2017 12:39:00 PM
Amazing as always. Truth
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Date: 11/10/2017 10:13:00 PM
I saw you both got POTD, and so well deserved, this was a great poem! I will also say "inspiring"
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Date: 11/10/2017 9:20:00 AM
This is so powerful. Congrats to both of you. It really hits the reader hard with truth and description. well done :)
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/10/2017 9:21:00 AM
Thanks Heidi
Date: 11/10/2017 9:18:00 AM
wow we made potd.thank you for writing with me...Seren
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/10/2017 9:19:00 AM
You're welcome...let's hope the judge likes it

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