I Shall But Wait

The murmur of winds urges me to ride past new moon’s seasons … it’s not joy I shall feed on; no, perhaps a more raw wildfire: a glaze bursting in the dark or morn of life as is; this craving to sow my girlish harvest with a nectar of mindful knowing, of aging; sweet-sour yet somewhat delectable... Then to gather new seeds, wait for grass and toil in fireglow over hills and oceans, clutching all the epiphanies that shall hold me together. Brian Strand Premiere Contest 130 Re- posted 2/25/2018

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Date: 4/9/2018 2:06:00 PM
Lovely, nette. Congrats on your winning poem.
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Date: 2/28/2018 2:56:00 PM
Lovely work Nette, congratulations...
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Date: 2/26/2018 2:01:00 AM
Congratulations, Nette on your win with such a beautiful poem.
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Date: 2/25/2018 1:34:00 PM
So lovely, Nette! Congrats. Janice
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Date: 3/12/2016 8:57:00 AM
Quite good! especially the ending
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Date: 2/3/2016 3:27:00 AM
Nette, Congratulations, LOVE LINDA
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Date: 1/29/2016 2:24:00 AM
Lovely poem n win nette.. big congrats!
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Date: 1/28/2016 7:57:00 PM
Congratulations on your win! Excellent.
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Date: 1/28/2016 7:41:00 PM
Well done Nette, congrats on your placement ... you earned it with this beauty
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Date: 1/28/2016 3:35:00 PM
Congrats on a fine win Nette
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Date: 1/28/2016 1:55:00 PM
Inspirational.....Congrats on your win Nette!
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Date: 1/28/2016 12:51:00 PM
Oh Nette, beautiful, you are the best :) *Smiles* Congrats lovely lady:)
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Date: 1/28/2016 12:17:00 PM
Simply exquisite, Nette. Congratulations on your great podium win. 7+Fav, Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 1/28/2016 10:05:00 AM
The bliss from this page cannot be exhausted. This is incredible and wonderful. Great lines and an awesome 7
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Date: 1/26/2016 11:00:00 AM
Great write, good luck ...
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Date: 1/26/2016 10:37:00 AM
This is the life I want; undaunted, lion-hearted. A magnificent poem igniting my thoughts!
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Date: 1/26/2016 9:29:00 AM
nette, this is truly beautiful, it just flowed along leaving me breathless, awesome writing, dear heart ~
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Date: 1/26/2016 3:44:00 AM
- To be read as a beautiful painting, Nette - Luck in contest - Happy Tuesday :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/26/2016 3:16:00 AM
A most pleasant adventure the reading of your poetry is, dearest nette! Good luck!
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Date: 1/26/2016 12:35:00 AM
Your passion for life is aflame through this lustrous poem. Live well!
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Date: 1/25/2016 10:54:00 PM
This stirring poem indulges in rich landscapes of what lies ahead. Nostalgic and fiery. Pleased to have joined your last contest.
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