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I see beyond this flashing screen, as you judge my poem, nice and clean. I know you have your rules. They are taught in all the schools. But, I failed. So, please don't be mean. You told us to not be trite, and I'm trying to get it right. It's like a jailhouse poem. As I try to keep it flowin'. Cause I have a hot date tonight. Having entered your contest, I will now sit back and rest. Cause, I know you'll be fair. As you pull up a chair. And judge if my poems the best. Written for the "I See Beyond...." contest.

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Date: 1/9/2012 6:54:00 PM
Hi Chris, Congratulations are in order! Your poem made me smile. Thank you for your comment. Yes, aliens are demons. :) M
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Christopher Bunton
Date: 1/10/2012 3:17:00 PM
Thank You!!
Date: 12/27/2011 2:32:00 PM
Very creative work..Congrats on your winning work..Sara
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Christopher Bunton
Date: 12/27/2011 3:18:00 PM
Thank you!!!
Date: 12/27/2011 10:04:00 AM
This made me smile, Christopher! Congratulations!
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Christopher Bunton
Date: 12/27/2011 3:18:00 PM
Thank you!!!
Date: 12/27/2011 6:35:00 AM
Clever. Congratulations x
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Christopher Bunton
Date: 12/27/2011 3:18:00 PM
Thank you!!
Date: 12/27/2011 5:29:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Paula Swanson's "I See Beyond" contest Christopher. Love, Carol
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Christopher Bunton
Date: 12/27/2011 6:13:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 12/26/2011 10:22:00 PM
An enjoyable read Christopher. Congratulaitions
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Christopher Bunton
Date: 12/27/2011 6:15:00 AM
Thank you!!!
Date: 12/26/2011 5:09:00 PM
Cute take on this contest which was open to so many interpretations. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Christopher Bunton
Date: 12/27/2011 6:15:00 AM
Thank you!!
Date: 12/26/2011 4:25:00 PM
Christopher congrats on your win, you did well..David
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Christopher Bunton
Date: 12/27/2011 6:16:00 AM
Thank You!!
Date: 12/25/2011 10:47:00 AM
Thank you! Merry Christmas to you too!
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Date: 12/24/2011 9:35:00 PM
Christhopher... Have a Merry Christmas and a happy New Year. May your Wishes come true this coming Year! God, bless you and your happy family. Always, here to enjoy the love that goes around the soup... ~p.d.
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Christopher Bunton
Date: 12/27/2011 6:15:00 AM
Thank you!!!

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