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I Saw the Moon

At night silver moon in the puddle of the street straightening her hair

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Ann Foster

Date: 6/16/2019 7:34:00 PM

This one danced for me. Thank you. Ann

Alkas Poetry
Date: 6/16/2019 7:59:00 PM

I do believe that poets are able to that... Thank you Ann, salute alkas

Gershon Wolf

Date: 4/30/2019 6:13:00 PM

Nice twist in line 3, Alkas. Best wishes, Gershon

Alkas Poetry
Date: 5/1/2019 3:43:00 AM

Dear poet Gershon, thank you for coming here and comment my Haiku...Thanks for mentioning the twist in line 3, It was really necessary...You are a good poet i hope we become friends. Salute, alkas

Jeff Connelly

Date: 4/29/2019 11:54:00 PM

Alkas this haiku is just just so damn perfect. So solid. Do telling. Simply beautiful.

Jeff Connelly
Date: 4/30/2019 11:58:00 AM

As so do your words Alkas. A poetic mind meld

Alkas Poetry
Date: 4/30/2019 3:15:00 AM

Hi, Jeff you are very good with the words When you comment ... Thank you my friend, your words stimulate me salute alkas

Silent One

Date: 4/29/2019 1:51:00 PM

great imagery Alkas..

Alkas Poetry
Date: 4/29/2019 10:22:00 PM

I thank you dear Silent One for your comment. Salute Alkas

Ilene Bauer

Date: 4/29/2019 1:23:00 PM

poetic, indeed! this is lovely, alkas!

Alkas Poetry
Date: 4/29/2019 10:24:00 PM

Dear Ilene, i thank you for your lovely comment, i always try to do my best... salute Alkas.

Jack Ellison

Date: 4/29/2019 9:41:00 AM

Love it... so observant of life's simple things! Cheers my new friend!

Alkas Poetry
Date: 4/29/2019 12:22:00 PM

Hi, Jack.Thank you my dear new friend, I really enjoyed it. your comment ... really the poetry is haunted in all the angles. In the simple and the magical salute alkas

Constance La France

Date: 4/29/2019 8:49:00 AM

Alkas, I like your haiku a lot, great turn on line 3, well done !

Alkas Poetry
Date: 4/29/2019 8:58:00 AM

Hi, Dear poet friend, I'm glad for your comment , and noticed the inversion I made ... salute alkas