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I Rowed My Hoarse

I rowed my hoarse Dobbin along the rode home When I road him I found that I was getting saddle saw I sore a children’s park a little way along the rowed So I road there on my hoarse and rested My hoarse soar some tasty grass to eat I chatted to some children until I was horse They stroked my hoarse and fed him mints I road my hoarse and the children rowed him too I sore how much fun they had when they road Dobbin So I told them if I soar them in the park when I rowed past I would stop and they could have fun when they road my hoarse Homophones used road, rowed, rode, sore*, saw, soar, horse and hoarse (based on UK pronunciation) Contest: Wordplay Extravaganza Sponsored by John Hamilton 03~17~16

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Laura Leiser

Date: 3/29/2016 6:10:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Jan :)

Jan Allison
Date: 3/29/2016 6:11:00 PM

Thanks so much Laura:-)It was a fun contest to enter:-) hugs jan xx

Iris E. Sankey- Lewis

Date: 3/29/2016 9:34:00 AM

Huh. I C U have gone far with originality and daring.

Jan Allison
Date: 3/29/2016 9:49:00 AM

Thanks Iris I did have fun with this poem:-) hugs Jan xx

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 3/29/2016 3:11:00 AM

Sorry Jan.. the comment for Laura landed up here.. this one is brilliant..

Jan Allison
Date: 3/29/2016 4:30:00 AM

Thanks Dr Sharma:-) hugs Jan xx

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 3/29/2016 3:04:00 AM

Yet another lovely poem n win Laura.. big congrats!

Jan Allison
Date: 3/29/2016 4:29:00 AM

:-) hugs jan xx

Sandra Haight

Date: 3/28/2016 3:18:00 PM

Jan, great write! Congratulations on your win in the Wordplay Extravaganza contest! Hugs, Sandra

Jan Allison
Date: 3/28/2016 3:19:00 PM

Many thanks Sandra I love writing with homophones:-) hugs jan xx

Eve Roper

Date: 3/28/2016 1:51:00 PM

Awesome write, Jan, congratulations on your win!!!! Hugs Eve

Jan Allison
Date: 3/28/2016 1:54:00 PM

Thanks so much Eve i do love writing with homophones:-) hugs Jan xx

Jean Murray

Date: 3/18/2016 5:54:00 PM

Your humour always shines through Jan.

Jan Allison
Date: 3/18/2016 5:56:00 PM

Thanks Jean I do love writing for these humourous contests:-) hugs jan xx

Mama Bear

Date: 3/18/2016 8:46:00 AM

You have this one down pat. Hope you win as it is most unique. Canadian east coasters also speak somewhat this way. Hugs Edith

Jan Allison
Date: 3/18/2016 8:50:00 AM

I'm glad you understood it Mama bear I do find some differences in pronunciation and it makes it complicated especially for contests:-) hugs Jan xx

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 3/17/2016 8:03:00 PM

G'day Jan ... really enjoyed your take on the English language Jan. You've highlighted how difficult it must be to learn later in life - thank you and good luck - Lindsay

Jan Allison
Date: 3/17/2016 8:06:00 PM

The English language is complicated with so many variations of spelling and meaning and also the differences in pronunciation as highlighted by Andrea:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/17/2016 7:19:00 PM

haha, it is so weird to me that you are using Sore (I believe that is how you pronounce the word saw?) I think on the east coast Americans pronounce it that way too. Way to go, coming up with another poem on those crazy homophones, my friend.

Jan Allison
Date: 3/17/2016 7:25:00 PM

Yes in the UK both versions of 'saw' and sore sound the same:-)I do love writing these homophone poems:-) hugs Jan xx

Constance La France

Date: 3/17/2016 6:13:00 PM

Jan, this is really great, you did wonderful with all those homophones, best of luck in the contest, and I am loving this 7 ~

Jan Allison
Date: 3/17/2016 6:19:00 PM

Thanks Constance it's my first poem in a few days am just glad to be writing again:-) hugs jan xx

Paul Callus

Date: 3/17/2016 4:37:00 PM

DEER me...I RED this with TIERS in my AYES, Jan! YEW are SOW funny:) You ROWED YORE HOARSE and HEAD a WAIL of a THYME! ~ gl in the contest...hugs // paul

Jan Allison
Date: 3/17/2016 5:38:00 PM

LOL Paul there were so many homophones I wanted to use but could only choose 3 I remember the fun I had when I wrote for Jerry's homophone contest last year:-) hugs Jan xx

Tim Smith

Date: 3/17/2016 1:23:00 PM

You're killing me Jan. Homophones are a pet peeve of mine ...lol...well done...my mind wouldn't let me do one : )

Jan Allison
Date: 3/17/2016 1:32:00 PM

I've not written in a few days Tim this was the best my poorly muse could come up with:-( hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/17/2016 1:03:00 PM

- Great written dear Jan, a little difficult to read ....... read s l o w l y :)))) - Best wishes in the contest ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison
Date: 3/17/2016 1:31:00 PM

LOL I think these poems are fun to write and read:-) hugs Jan xx

Daniel Turner

Date: 3/17/2016 10:41:00 AM

Very nice play on words, Jan. One definitely must read slowly. Really nice to see you out on the town. Peace nice lady:)

Jan Allison
Date: 3/17/2016 1:30:00 PM

Thanks for dropping by Daniel I do appreciate your support:-) hugs Jan xx

Kelli White

Date: 3/17/2016 9:38:00 AM

Well done Jan. Very cute. Sort of a tongue twister. Like Susie sells seashells down by the seashore.

Jan Allison
Date: 3/17/2016 1:30:00 PM

Thanks Kelli:-) hugs Jan xx