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I Ride My Bike

i ride my bike - - my father lets go and i fall for gwendolen's bike contest

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/30/2012 8:39:00 PM

hahahaha. I would give this one a placement for sure, oh master of the fast poem!

Elliott Bowe The Drunken Poet

Date: 4/30/2012 12:45:00 AM

Well written dear poet.I enjoyed this much.

Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 4/29/2012 8:48:00 PM

In these few words you have sketched those sweet beautiful memories of childhood which very seldom come on the surface. Great and magnificently written Haiku, which is likely to touch almost every mind. Superb. My good wishes for your contest entry.…Love and best wishes...Ravindra...Jack H

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/29/2012 2:54:00 PM

WOW... I think,,, this contest... brought that memory.. where we fall... this one a delighted poem... thank you and good luck...pd

Sandy Ivy D

Date: 4/29/2012 2:25:00 PM

Good luck,

Russell Sivey

Date: 4/29/2012 2:22:00 PM

This is a magnificent poem my friend! I love the last line, "and i fall" that's exactly what happens when you are a child and you are just starting to ride a bike...and trying to learn exactly how to ride a bike...by yourself! This is a perfect interpretation of the contest! I really enjoyed your write that I have read this afternoon! Great Work!!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/29/2012 1:52:00 PM

Brings memories from my youth and my children's ...Good luck in the contest..Reads like a winner..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Diana Mohammed

Date: 4/29/2012 1:30:00 PM

(Laugh!!).. A loving memory Jack!! Thanks for the reminder!!..Love Diana

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/29/2012 12:38:00 PM

LOL I guess lots of us had a similar experience, Jack. So cute! Winning wishes for Gwen's contest. Love, Carolyn