I Remember Being With You
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"recently scenes of early life have stolen into my mind, like breezes blown ..."
Quote by _Samuel Taylor Coleridge
The sun rose soon, that day, for an unmatched deal.
I went to a park to muse paternity.
That day, I felt proud and scared. The path ordeal.
Thrive in the way of wild soul modernity.
A concept follows a thriving mood of hope.
People who swell their worth flaunt perversity.
The baby's eyes are soft since they lack a scope.
I'm in awe of our son's sense of compassion.
He proved faith beyond the zenith and the slope.
I praised my youngster's unrivaled dispassion.
I kissed his forehead and cheek as he faced me.
At first glance, our kid has a sublime passion.
You swap as you grasp that God's bliss is the key.
Of bright life gifts, no matter how wide or tall,
Having you as a son, a prime gift to see.
I recall telling you our truths in a drawl,
Playing cards and watching movies was grand fun,
Include eat-outs, pleasure, and watching football.
Or play video games together and run,
They were fun, eating and chatting about school,
I'll never skip those moments when the wheel spun.
I'd crave to ween of you in the swimming pool.
I wish to grasp how our nation was too cool.
Written: October 02, 2022
Writing Challenge - Past Memories - ''T'' Forms Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Constance La France
Checked by "howmanysyllables.com"
and "rhytmezone.com"
Each line has 11 syllables
Word bank:
*ween: think
*cope: handle
*tope: to drink hard or frequently
*drawl: slow speak
*flaunt: exhibit, display
*swap: change
Copyright © Sotto Poet | Year Posted 2022
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