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"recently scenes of early life have stolen into my mind, like breezes blown ..." Quote by _Samuel Taylor Coleridge
The sun rose soon, that day, for an unmatched deal. I went to a park to muse paternity. That day, I felt proud and scared. The path ordeal. Thrive in the way of wild soul modernity. A concept follows a thriving mood of hope. People who swell their worth flaunt perversity. The baby's eyes are soft since they lack a scope. I'm in awe of our son's sense of compassion. He proved faith beyond the zenith and the slope. I praised my youngster's unrivaled dispassion. I kissed his forehead and cheek as he faced me. At first glance, our kid has a sublime passion. You swap as you grasp that God's bliss is the key. Of bright life gifts, no matter how wide or tall, Having you as a son, a prime gift to see. I recall telling you our truths in a drawl, Playing cards and watching movies was grand fun, Include eat-outs, pleasure, and watching football. Or play video games together and run, They were fun, eating and chatting about school, I'll never skip those moments when the wheel spun. I'd crave to ween of you in the swimming pool. I wish to grasp how our nation was too cool.
Written: October 02, 2022 Writing Challenge - Past Memories - ''T'' Forms Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France Checked by "howmanysyllables.com" and "rhytmezone.com" Each line has 11 syllables Word bank: *ween: think *cope: handle *tope: to drink hard or frequently *drawl: slow speak *flaunt: exhibit, display *swap: change

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Date: 11/12/2022 1:07:00 AM
Sotto, a wonderful Terza Rima and congratulations on your placement in my contest, Writing Challenge - Past Memories- "T" Forms, and of course I like the quote, and I like the image and music too, well done !
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Date: 11/3/2022 7:32:00 PM
Beautiful memories Sotto of those early days with your son. Back to say congratulations on your win in Constance’s contest… Belle
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Date: 11/1/2022 8:37:00 PM
What a lovely story of your newborn son, and all the memories that followed, congratulations on your win~
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Date: 11/1/2022 11:17:00 AM
What lovely and heartwarming memories so like mine Lasaad! Thank you for reminding me of all those parenting experiences that are treasured memories! Congratulations on your win. This is a treasure that I hope your child will also treasure. Blessings my friend.
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Date: 11/1/2022 7:10:00 AM
Dearest memories, indeed! Very beautifully expressed in the Tereza Rima form with minute details. Congratulations!
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Date: 11/1/2022 3:09:00 AM
Congratulations dear friend on your win ! Family ties are our great strength!
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Date: 10/3/2022 5:54:00 AM
You can be so proud of having a son so compassionate.... a gift from God in whose company you enjoy pleasurable moments ! Great and sweet memories!
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Date: 10/3/2022 5:53:00 AM
Cherished memories resonate throughout my friend. Beloved is the gift of family. Lovely endearing sentiments you convey, Lasaad.
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Date: 10/3/2022 2:18:00 AM
A great poem that deserves a high placement. Good to see such a happy link between father and son. I wish you the best.
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Date: 10/2/2022 9:24:00 PM
God's bliss is the key. Of bright life gifts, no matter how wide or tall, Having you as a son, a prime gift to see. So very true. Our children are our soul. Blessings my friend
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Date: 10/2/2022 5:17:00 PM
Sotto your poem is fabulous, you have been and are a fantastic father, one can tell from the writes from your heart… Belle
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