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i remember


we gazed up at the moon
the two of us at peace
fall was in the air
everything seemed right


AP: Honorable Mention 2025
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Lane Avatar
March 6, 2025 at 6:24 AM
Fall has always been my favorite season. Loved your 4 liner.
Gauthier Avatar
March 6, 2025 at 7:28 AM
Thank you very much, Lin ~
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