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My old boss was really the pits He’d shout and have HUGE hissy fits At the end of the day I received little pay I got to the end of my wits I did work for him as a cleaner He was rude and couldn’t be meaner I have to admit I told him I QUIT … I hated his work and demeanor! Fictional write! Contest Resignation Sponsored by Nayda Ivette Negron

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Date: 10/11/2016 9:03:00 PM
Back with congrats, Jan!
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Date: 10/11/2016 6:51:00 PM
Congratulations Jan on the placement of the contest.
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Date: 10/6/2016 8:44:00 AM
Very good thing to do, even in fiction...ha ha:)
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Date: 10/1/2016 6:04:00 AM
Very nicely penned Jan...GL in the contest
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Date: 10/1/2016 6:11:00 AM
Thanks Joseph:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/30/2016 3:51:00 PM
Sounds like your boss was a jerk Was a place you no longer could work Liked the limerick you penned When I read it I grinned Your quitting for me was a perk
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Date: 10/1/2016 3:30:00 AM
LOL Franklin - pure fiction write for a contest ... I love your clever comment:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/30/2016 2:29:00 PM
Humorous... Enjoyed :-)
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Date: 9/30/2016 2:31:00 PM
Thanks Bukiwe:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/30/2016 10:02:00 AM
Brilliant limerick. I just love it. A Fav!
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Date: 9/30/2016 10:03:00 AM
Thanks as ever for your support Armand:-)love and hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/30/2016 8:24:00 AM
One should not put up with being harassed or bullied by a boss but so many do because they need the job
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Date: 9/30/2016 10:03:00 AM
That is very true Tim:-( hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/30/2016 8:11:00 AM
Good for you, Jan!! Well done for a bully being put in his place! An enjoyable pair of limerick:) Hugs // paul
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Date: 9/30/2016 8:18:00 AM
Thanks Paul I was unsure which meaning of resignation to go for and then this popped into my brain:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/30/2016 7:44:00 AM
LOUDER LOUDER!!!! Good luck, Jan :)
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Date: 9/30/2016 7:45:00 AM
ha ha ha I CAN take the battery out of my hearing aid - that turns it off hee hee:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 9/30/2016 3:18:00 AM
- The boss sucks !!!! :)))) - Luck in contest, Jan - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/30/2016 6:09:00 AM
LOL Good job its fiction for me Anne-Lise:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/30/2016 2:49:00 AM
I *knew* you'd give the theme a humorous twist :) Good luck on the contest, Jan. Agnes
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Date: 9/30/2016 2:55:00 AM
I couldn't resist Agnes - I did have a rhyming word to go with QUIT but I decided to change that line lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/30/2016 2:00:00 AM
sounds like my bosses in real life lol good luck in the comp
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Date: 9/30/2016 2:17:00 AM
Don't copy out the poem and leave it around the office then Stephen lol:-) I did have another word to rhyme with quit but changed the line @@X! lol:-)hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/29/2016 10:54:00 PM
I must admit I've quit many jobs, I just go walkabouts. Well done Jan /|\
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Date: 9/30/2016 2:29:00 AM
LOL Sadly I left my last job on health grounds - had been there 16 years and loved it but my health was far more important:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/29/2016 8:23:00 PM
Fun and humorous limerick! G/L in the contest! Hugs~
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Date: 9/30/2016 2:29:00 AM
Thanks Cheryl:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/29/2016 6:50:00 PM
Hi Jan, as always i have come for my laugh from the limerick queen. I always get what i need. Your humour always hits the mark. Good luck in the contest Jan. Now i can go to bed with a smile. May your fun gland ever sing. I think you can tell this one hit the spot very nicely. Hugs....Mike. XX. A definite funny bone 7.
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Date: 9/30/2016 2:29:00 AM
Thanks Mike so lovely to see you back again:-) hugs Jan xx

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