I Pass the Graveyard

I pass the graveyard deep in snow.
One woman at a headstone weeps
all dressed in black like winter crows

as memories in warmth she keeps.
While icicles from boughs hang low
one woman at a headstone weeps.

Still muted angels' trumpets blow
and 'cross the powder darkness creeps
while icicles from boughs hang low.

On granite crags do snowflakes heap
where frost on trees like lichens grow
and 'cross the powder darkness creeps.

As past the iron fence I go
her mortal love in silence sleeps
where frost on trees like lichens grow.

My heart into my throat now leaps.
I pass the graveyard deep in snow;
her mortal love in silence sleeps
all dressed in black like winter crows.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Tripp Avatar
January 8, 2018 at 6:11 AM
Congratulations, Dale. This is a beautifully written terzanelle
Roper Avatar
January 7, 2018 at 10:22 AM
Congratulations on your win,Dale , was beautiful before beautiful now. Hugs Eve ~`*
Cozart Avatar
January 7, 2018 at 10:43 AM
Thanks very much, Eve.
Gauthier Avatar
January 6, 2018 at 3:30 PM
Another visit to express my delight at your win. Congrats, Dale.
Cozart Avatar
January 6, 2018 at 4:27 PM
Thanks, Line.
Ashley Avatar
January 6, 2018 at 1:39 PM
Dale, you illuminate the content of your poem with graceful poetic lines of sad, moody melancholy in vivid imagery and wonderful rhymes. A gorgeous write. Congratulations for your excellent win.. Warmest wishes ~Susan
Cozart Avatar
January 6, 2018 at 1:57 PM
Thanks so much, Susan.
De Beaulieu Avatar
December 1, 2017 at 1:48 PM
Well some people dress in black at the grave sites. There will always be someone weeping for their loved ones. Dale have a nice day my friend.
Gauthier Avatar
November 25, 2017 at 9:01 AM
Well done, Dale. You captured the atmosphere and mood of the graveyard magnificently. A fave with me.
Cozart Avatar
November 25, 2017 at 9:32 AM
Thanks so much, Line!
Daniel Avatar
November 18, 2017 at 6:12 AM
This is brilliant, Dale, first terzanelle and your best, I should say:)
Roper Avatar
November 14, 2017 at 8:47 PM
Wonderful poem, Dale, good luck in the contest hugs Eve
Hamilton Avatar
November 12, 2017 at 10:07 PM
Really like this form Dale you do it well, I like it better than a pantoum, the repeating lines give it a lyrical feel.
Cozart Avatar
November 13, 2017 at 7:53 AM
Thanks a lot, John!
Dietrich Avatar
November 12, 2017 at 8:30 PM
wow, your first go round?? This is freaking amazing, Dale!!! You outdid yourself with your first terzanelle!!! a FAVE
Cozart Avatar
November 12, 2017 at 8:55 PM
Thanks so much, Andrea! I really appreciate it.
Allison Avatar
November 12, 2017 at 6:46 PM
what deep sad imagery and I adore the line about the women looking like black crows - it is a perfect description!!! what a lovely form and poem dale, it reminds me of the pantoum form with the repeated lines - its much nicer than the triolet form which I find so boring and you have inspired me i may give it ago. its a shame the contest isn't for new poems:-(hugs jan xx
Cozart Avatar
November 12, 2017 at 6:48 PM
Thanks, Jan. I'm glad it turned out seeing as it was my first go 'round.
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