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I overheard two characters thinking

I overheard two characters thinking: one about regret, the other about a maiden's pinking. Whether they knew one another, I cannot say, although one looked at the other, while the other looked away. And as one soaped lipstick off an empty glass, the other kept on drinking.

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Date: 3/16/2025 1:26:00 PM
I am delighted to read your post this day. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. Creative. Way to go. Sara K
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Marinus Jansen
Date: 3/16/2025 6:51:00 PM
Thanks for your positive comment, Sara. Feels good. :-)

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