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I Now Hear Your Butterfly

I now hear your butterfly sings your morning song on the eve of marching to front sprinkling vermilion tint on your face in demure smile It may burst into tears like shells explode in war front touching red end of death's black grin Fibonacci - Poetry Contest Sponsor rob carmack 9th March, 2015

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Date: 3/20/2015 10:50:00 PM
Rajat, Congratulations on your awesome Fibonacci win :):):) Luv ~LINDA~
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Date: 3/18/2015 9:14:00 AM
Descriptive and expressive winning work..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 3/17/2015 5:23:00 PM
Rajat, very descriptive write. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Date: 3/16/2015 8:35:00 AM
what a interesting image, you see the world in such a different way and it makes you an intriguing poet! Nice write and win!
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Date: 3/15/2015 11:50:00 PM
RAJAT, CONGRATULATIONS, on your Fibonacci WIN! ~SKAT
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Date: 3/15/2015 11:16:00 AM
Congratulation on this wonderful win and a 7
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Date: 3/15/2015 7:39:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with these poingnant word of war. Big Smiles, Dane Ann
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Date: 3/15/2015 7:31:00 AM
This is very creative, Rajat; the ending extra good! A deserved winner...congratulations my friend. // paul
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Date: 3/15/2015 12:50:00 AM
Wonderful Rajat! Big congrats!
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Date: 3/14/2015 8:37:00 PM
I love your twists Rajat. Thank you and congrats.
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Date: 3/14/2015 8:29:00 PM
beautifully penned many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 3/14/2015 8:00:00 PM
Congratulations on your win for this awesome poem, Rajat. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 3/14/2015 7:40:00 PM
Congratulations on this great win, Rajat!! Hugs, Kimberly
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Date: 3/10/2015 6:14:00 PM
I agree with Bindu. a very powerful image!
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Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 3/11/2015 7:00:00 AM
Love Andie
Date: 3/9/2015 1:48:00 PM
Hi Rajat, this is excellent! I love the theme. hugs, Kimberly
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Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 3/9/2015 11:06:00 PM
Love Kimberly. God bless

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