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I Never Ever Want To See You Again

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One look at you – that’s all it took
Your long long legs that seem to go on forever
Those eyes staring at me
All I feel for you is revulsion
Hate – it’s a horrible word but I simply detest you
There will never be a place for you in my life ...
Goodbye
Then I flushed the spider down the plughole! 

26th March 2015

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Odeline Chigwedere

Date: 4/22/2015 6:46:00 AM

Oh my...im so reliefed it was a spider....i enjoyed your poem.

Jan Allison
Date: 4/22/2015 6:49:00 AM

Thanks so much - i do love to write with a twist if I can:-) hugs jan xx

Kelly Deschler

Date: 3/31/2015 10:31:00 PM

I loved the surprise ending! A clever write, Jan!

Jan Allison
Date: 4/1/2015 2:22:00 AM

Thanks Kelly:-) Hugs jan xx

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 3/29/2015 9:45:00 PM

Great twist, poor spider...loved it!

Jan Allison
Date: 3/30/2015 2:22:00 AM

I do like to write with a twist if I can:-) Hugs Jan xx

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 3/29/2015 9:44:00 PM

What a wicked web we weave once we start to decreep!

Jan Allison
Date: 3/30/2015 2:21:00 AM

LOL Hugs Jan xx

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 3/29/2015 9:43:00 PM

I hope it wasn't Peter Parker?

Jan Allison
Date: 3/30/2015 2:21:00 AM

He wouldn't fit down the plug hole Armand! Hugs Jan xx

Mama Bear

Date: 3/29/2015 7:42:00 PM

A creepy crawly and not a guy. Fooled me again. Hugs Edith

Jan Allison
Date: 3/30/2015 2:20:00 AM

You know I'm a bit twisted in my poems lol:-) Hugs Jan xx

Njeri Hunjeri

Date: 3/28/2015 7:54:00 AM

Lol the whole time it was about a spider!!! Jan you are good. I almost started crying until I saw the name spider:-)

Jan Allison
Date: 3/28/2015 7:58:00 AM

I do like to write with a twist if I can:-) Hugs Jan xx

Jack Horne

Date: 3/28/2015 7:49:00 AM

LOL, love your sense of humour, Jan

Jan Allison
Date: 3/28/2015 7:57:00 AM

Thanks Jack:-) hugs Jan xx

James Fraser

Date: 3/27/2015 2:32:00 PM

Aw, poor Spider. I like these little chappies and chappets for all the other little bugs they scoff! You still made me chuckle though, you always do Jan with your humor, I love it, hugs//James xx

Jan Allison
Date: 3/27/2015 2:40:00 PM

Hubby at work son at university - what is a girl to do apart from not smell so sweet lol:-) Hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/26/2015 11:17:00 PM

you are so hilarious , Jan. I could not guess what it was until the end!!

Jan Allison
Date: 3/27/2015 2:29:00 AM

and my spider removing son and hubby weren't there and I didn't want to be smelly lol:-( hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/26/2015 11:17:00 PM

and a FAVE

Jan Allison
Date: 3/27/2015 2:30:00 AM

aww thank you:-) Hugs Jan xx

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 3/26/2015 9:37:00 PM

G'day Jan... And late at night when you're asleep, ten spiders up the plughole creep and deep in folklore its been said that spiders like a nice warm bed. Sleep tight Jan - Lindsay

Jan Allison
Date: 3/27/2015 2:29:00 AM

Oh thanks Lindsay you sure know how to cheer me up! lol - I did end up in hospital as a child over a beeping spider and I was in bed when it happened - I feel a poem is coming on ... watch this space:-) hugs jan xx

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/26/2015 8:47:00 PM

Awww poor little spider, who is going to weave Charlotte's web??? This is cute Jan!

Jan Allison
Date: 3/27/2015 2:27:00 AM

grr spiders they are such a pain - lol - as a kid I ended up in hospital over one - really should write a poem about that experience lol:-) Hugs Jan xx

Willie A. Buchanan

Date: 3/26/2015 7:49:00 PM

This is very good, my dear! Proud of you,stood your ground and defeated the enemy! Thanks for your visit and comments. Death of a loved one is all ways a hard pill to swallow.Check out,"THE CREEPY MORTICIAN." Have a nice day!

Jan Allison
Date: 3/26/2015 7:52:00 PM

Oh I will thanks Willie:-) Hugs Jan xxx

George Aul

Date: 3/26/2015 5:01:00 PM

Very clever......... George

Jan Allison
Date: 3/26/2015 5:12:00 PM

Thanks George:-) Hugs Jan xx

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/26/2015 1:29:00 PM

I like the surprise ending ..Great work..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Jan Allison
Date: 3/26/2015 1:40:00 PM

Thanks Sara:-) hugs jan xx

Charlene Wilcox

Date: 3/26/2015 11:39:00 AM

I like different and to think the ending was about a spider. I really liked this. TY for sharing it with Me and keep writing Your amazing riddles.

Jan Allison
Date: 3/26/2015 12:01:00 PM

Thanks Charlene:-) Hugs Jan xx

J.W. Earnings
Date: 3/26/2015 11:40:00 AM

I love the picture... aww.

J.W. Earnings

Date: 3/26/2015 11:38:00 AM

:) Awesome one. I rate this a 7 cuz it's to the point and it's simple with rage. I dig it.

Jan Allison
Date: 3/26/2015 12:01:00 PM

Hey David lovely to see you again:-) Hugs Jan xx

Julia Ward

Date: 3/26/2015 11:04:00 AM

I like how you kept the suspense up until the last moment, Jan. Hugs, Julia, xx

Jan Allison
Date: 3/26/2015 11:19:00 AM

Thanks Julia:-) Hugs Jan xx

Kp Nunez

Date: 3/26/2015 9:36:00 AM

Lol! You're riding high! Hugs! Kim:)

Jan Allison
Date: 3/26/2015 9:42:00 AM

I may be ... the poor spider isn't lol:-) Hugs Jan

Viv Wigley

Date: 3/26/2015 8:37:00 AM

We have a spider in the living room. It comes out at night. We know, because we have a wooden floor and we can hear it coming. Like an army of tap-dancing biros. I daren't flush it away, since it knows my address and my phone number. It would be back. Fun verse, Jan . Viv x

Viv Wigley
Date: 3/26/2015 8:48:00 AM

I'm sure that you're as lovely as your current one x

Jan Allison
Date: 3/26/2015 8:40:00 AM

Your comment made me smile Mr Viv and I like the new avatar - I hide behind mine lol:-) Hugs Jan xx