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One look at you – that’s all it took Your long long legs that seem to go on forever Those eyes staring at me All I feel for you is revulsion Hate – it’s a horrible word but I simply detest you There will never be a place for you in my life ... Goodbye Then I flushed the spider down the plughole! 26th March 2015

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Date: 4/22/2015 6:46:00 AM
Oh my...im so reliefed it was a spider....i enjoyed your poem.
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 4/22/2015 6:49:00 AM
Thanks so much - i do love to write with a twist if I can:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 3/31/2015 10:31:00 PM
I loved the surprise ending! A clever write, Jan!
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Date: 4/1/2015 2:22:00 AM
Thanks Kelly:-) Hugs jan xx
Date: 3/29/2015 9:45:00 PM
Great twist, poor spider...loved it!
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 3/30/2015 2:22:00 AM
I do like to write with a twist if I can:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/29/2015 9:44:00 PM
What a wicked web we weave once we start to decreep!
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 3/30/2015 2:21:00 AM
LOL Hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/29/2015 9:43:00 PM
I hope it wasn't Peter Parker?
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 3/30/2015 2:21:00 AM
He wouldn't fit down the plug hole Armand! Hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/29/2015 7:42:00 PM
A creepy crawly and not a guy. Fooled me again. Hugs Edith
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 3/30/2015 2:20:00 AM
You know I'm a bit twisted in my poems lol:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/28/2015 7:54:00 AM
Lol the whole time it was about a spider!!! Jan you are good. I almost started crying until I saw the name spider:-)
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 3/28/2015 7:58:00 AM
I do like to write with a twist if I can:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/28/2015 7:49:00 AM
LOL, love your sense of humour, Jan
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 3/28/2015 7:57:00 AM
Thanks Jack:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/27/2015 2:32:00 PM
Aw, poor Spider. I like these little chappies and chappets for all the other little bugs they scoff! You still made me chuckle though, you always do Jan with your humor, I love it, hugs//James xx
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 3/27/2015 2:40:00 PM
Hubby at work son at university - what is a girl to do apart from not smell so sweet lol:-) Hugs jan xx
Date: 3/26/2015 11:17:00 PM
you are so hilarious , Jan. I could not guess what it was until the end!!
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Date: 3/27/2015 2:29:00 AM
and my spider removing son and hubby weren't there and I didn't want to be smelly lol:-( hugs jan xx
Date: 3/26/2015 11:17:00 PM
and a FAVE
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Date: 3/27/2015 2:30:00 AM
aww thank you:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/26/2015 9:37:00 PM
G'day Jan... And late at night when you're asleep, ten spiders up the plughole creep and deep in folklore its been said that spiders like a nice warm bed. Sleep tight Jan - Lindsay
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 3/27/2015 2:29:00 AM
Oh thanks Lindsay you sure know how to cheer me up! lol - I did end up in hospital as a child over a beeping spider and I was in bed when it happened - I feel a poem is coming on ... watch this space:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 3/26/2015 8:47:00 PM
Awww poor little spider, who is going to weave Charlotte's web??? This is cute Jan!
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Date: 3/27/2015 2:27:00 AM
grr spiders they are such a pain - lol - as a kid I ended up in hospital over one - really should write a poem about that experience lol:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/26/2015 7:49:00 PM
This is very good, my dear! Proud of you,stood your ground and defeated the enemy! Thanks for your visit and comments. Death of a loved one is all ways a hard pill to swallow.Check out,"THE CREEPY MORTICIAN." Have a nice day!
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Date: 3/26/2015 7:52:00 PM
Oh I will thanks Willie:-) Hugs Jan xxx
Date: 3/26/2015 5:01:00 PM
Very clever......... George
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 3/26/2015 5:12:00 PM
Thanks George:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/26/2015 1:29:00 PM
I like the surprise ending ..Great work..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 3/26/2015 1:40:00 PM
Thanks Sara:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 3/26/2015 11:39:00 AM
I like different and to think the ending was about a spider. I really liked this. TY for sharing it with Me and keep writing Your amazing riddles.
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 3/26/2015 12:01:00 PM
Thanks Charlene:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/26/2015 11:40:00 AM
I love the picture... aww.
Date: 3/26/2015 11:38:00 AM
:) Awesome one. I rate this a 7 cuz it's to the point and it's simple with rage. I dig it.
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 3/26/2015 12:01:00 PM
Hey David lovely to see you again:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/26/2015 11:04:00 AM
I like how you kept the suspense up until the last moment, Jan. Hugs, Julia, xx
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Date: 3/26/2015 11:19:00 AM
Thanks Julia:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/26/2015 9:36:00 AM
Lol! You're riding high! Hugs! Kim:)
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 3/26/2015 9:42:00 AM
I may be ... the poor spider isn't lol:-) Hugs Jan
Date: 3/26/2015 8:37:00 AM
We have a spider in the living room. It comes out at night. We know, because we have a wooden floor and we can hear it coming. Like an army of tap-dancing biros. I daren't flush it away, since it knows my address and my phone number. It would be back. Fun verse, Jan . Viv x
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Viv Wigley
Date: 3/26/2015 8:48:00 AM
I'm sure that you're as lovely as your current one x
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 3/26/2015 8:40:00 AM
Your comment made me smile Mr Viv and I like the new avatar - I hide behind mine lol:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/26/2015 8:33:00 AM
Well what can I say, except you know I love the turn. These are so fun because of the gotcha factor at the end. Great setup of tone. ((Hugs)) ~Jan
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 3/26/2015 8:39:00 AM
Thanks Janet I love to write with humour and a twist in the end if I can:-)Hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/26/2015 8:32:00 AM
Jan,you must be in a funny mode,fully enjoyed lol... Thanks bear hugs to you Tonytocaa
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 3/26/2015 8:39:00 AM
Aww thanks for the bear hug Tony - you know me I try and write with humour no matter what is happening in my life:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/26/2015 8:31:00 AM
Haha good job!
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 3/26/2015 8:37:00 AM
Cheers Cas:-) Hugs Jan xx