Jan Allison Poet Free verse

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I Never Ever Want To See You Again

One look at you – that’s all it took
Your long long legs that seem to go on forever
Those eyes staring at me
All I feel for you is revulsion
Hate – it’s a horrible word but I simply detest you
There will never be a place for you in my life ...
Goodbye
Then I flushed the spider down the plughole! 

26th March 2015

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Odeline Chigwedere April 22, 2015 at 6:46 AM Oh my...im so reliefed it was a spider....i enjoyed your poem. Jan Allison April 22, 2015 at 6:49 AM Thanks so much - i do love to write with a twist if I can:-) hugs jan xx

Kelly Deschler March 31, 2015 at 10:31 PM I loved the surprise ending! A clever write, Jan! Jan Allison April 1, 2015 at 2:22 AM Thanks Kelly:-) Hugs jan xx

Maurice Yvonne March 29, 2015 at 9:45 PM Great twist, poor spider...loved it! Jan Allison March 30, 2015 at 2:22 AM I do like to write with a twist if I can:-) Hugs Jan xx

Maurice Yvonne March 29, 2015 at 9:44 PM What a wicked web we weave once we start to decreep! Jan Allison March 30, 2015 at 2:21 AM LOL Hugs Jan xx

Maurice Yvonne March 29, 2015 at 9:43 PM I hope it wasn't Peter Parker? Jan Allison March 30, 2015 at 2:21 AM He wouldn't fit down the plug hole Armand! Hugs Jan xx

Mama Bear March 29, 2015 at 7:42 PM A creepy crawly and not a guy. Fooled me again. Hugs Edith Jan Allison March 30, 2015 at 2:20 AM You know I'm a bit twisted in my poems lol:-) Hugs Jan xx

Njeri Hunjeri March 28, 2015 at 7:54 AM Lol the whole time it was about a spider!!! Jan you are good. I almost started crying until I saw the name spider:-) Jan Allison March 28, 2015 at 7:58 AM I do like to write with a twist if I can:-) Hugs Jan xx

Jack Horne March 28, 2015 at 7:49 AM LOL, love your sense of humour, Jan Jan Allison March 28, 2015 at 7:57 AM Thanks Jack:-) hugs Jan xx

James Fraser March 27, 2015 at 2:32 PM Aw, poor Spider. I like these little chappies and chappets for all the other little bugs they scoff! You still made me chuckle though, you always do Jan with your humor, I love it, hugs//James xx Jan Allison March 27, 2015 at 2:40 PM Hubby at work son at university - what is a girl to do apart from not smell so sweet lol:-) Hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich March 26, 2015 at 11:17 PM and a FAVE Jan Allison March 27, 2015 at 2:30 AM aww thank you:-) Hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich March 26, 2015 at 11:17 PM you are so hilarious , Jan. I could not guess what it was until the end!! Jan Allison March 27, 2015 at 2:29 AM and my spider removing son and hubby weren't there and I didn't want to be smelly lol:-( hugs jan xx

Lindsay Laurie March 26, 2015 at 9:37 PM G'day Jan... And late at night when you're asleep, ten spiders up the plughole creep and deep in folklore its been said that spiders like a nice warm bed. Sleep tight Jan - Lindsay Jan Allison March 27, 2015 at 2:29 AM Oh thanks Lindsay you sure know how to cheer me up! lol - I did end up in hospital as a child over a beeping spider and I was in bed when it happened - I feel a poem is coming on ... watch this space:-) hugs jan xx

Richard Lamoureux March 26, 2015 at 8:47 PM Awww poor little spider, who is going to weave Charlotte's web??? This is cute Jan! Jan Allison March 27, 2015 at 2:27 AM grr spiders they are such a pain - lol - as a kid I ended up in hospital over one - really should write a poem about that experience lol:-) Hugs Jan xx

Willie A. Buchanan March 26, 2015 at 7:49 PM This is very good, my dear! Proud of you,stood your ground and defeated the enemy! Thanks for your visit and comments. Death of a loved one is all ways a hard pill to swallow.Check out,"THE CREEPY MORTICIAN." Have a nice day! Jan Allison March 26, 2015 at 7:52 PM Oh I will thanks Willie:-) Hugs Jan xxx

George Aul March 26, 2015 at 5:01 PM Very clever......... George Jan Allison March 26, 2015 at 5:12 PM Thanks George:-) Hugs Jan xx

Sara Kendrick March 26, 2015 at 1:29 PM I like the surprise ending ..Great work..Thanks for stopping by..Sara Jan Allison March 26, 2015 at 1:40 PM Thanks Sara:-) hugs jan xx

Charlene Wilcox March 26, 2015 at 11:39 AM I like different and to think the ending was about a spider. I really liked this. TY for sharing it with Me and keep writing Your amazing riddles. Jan Allison March 26, 2015 at 12:01 PM Thanks Charlene:-) Hugs Jan xx David William Breidenthal March 26, 2015 at 11:40 AM I love the picture... aww.

David William Breidenthal March 26, 2015 at 11:38 AM :) Awesome one. I rate this a 7 cuz it's to the point and it's simple with rage. I dig it. Jan Allison March 26, 2015 at 12:01 PM Hey David lovely to see you again:-) Hugs Jan xx

Julia Ward March 26, 2015 at 11:04 AM I like how you kept the suspense up until the last moment, Jan. Hugs, Julia, xx Jan Allison March 26, 2015 at 11:19 AM Thanks Julia:-) Hugs Jan xx

Kp Nunez March 26, 2015 at 9:36 AM Lol! You're riding high! Hugs! Kim:) Jan Allison March 26, 2015 at 9:42 AM I may be ... the poor spider isn't lol:-) Hugs Jan

Viv Wigley March 26, 2015 at 8:37 AM We have a spider in the living room. It comes out at night. We know, because we have a wooden floor and we can hear it coming. Like an army of tap-dancing biros. I daren't flush it away, since it knows my address and my phone number. It would be back. Fun verse, Jan . Viv x Viv Wigley March 26, 2015 at 8:48 AM I'm sure that you're as lovely as your current one x Jan Allison March 26, 2015 at 8:40 AM Your comment made me smile Mr Viv and I like the new avatar - I hide behind mine lol:-) Hugs Jan xx

Jaycee Cervenka March 26, 2015 at 8:33 AM Well what can I say, except you know I love the turn. These are so fun because of the gotcha factor at the end. Great setup of tone. ((Hugs)) ~Jan Jan Allison March 26, 2015 at 8:39 AM Thanks Janet I love to write with humour and a twist in the end if I can:-)Hugs Jan xx

Tonytocaa Camacho March 26, 2015 at 8:32 AM Jan,you must be in a funny mode,fully enjoyed lol... Thanks bear hugs to you Tonytocaa Jan Allison March 26, 2015 at 8:39 AM Aww thanks for the bear hug Tony - you know me I try and write with humour no matter what is happening in my life:-) Hugs Jan xx

Casarah Nance March 26, 2015 at 8:31 AM Haha good job! Jan Allison March 26, 2015 at 8:37 AM Cheers Cas:-) Hugs Jan xx