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I need your love , your kindness

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I need your love , your kindness

My belly burns in hunger, lips like an arid
land
You cant quench my thirst; you cant quench
my hunger
Let alone a little heart that craves for love
since birth!
Wearied and cold I am and lie down on the
pavement
Aching for a warm and cozy sleep tonight
Let in my dreams twinkle the stars up above
Oh! Allah ! , bless me a deep sleep with full stomach or wake me not in this heartless world again!
Feed the poor orphan and poor people. You r human right ?
Do sodqa , give your zakat o my precious dears

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Date: 5/15/2017 10:41:00 AM
A deep and powerful romantic write! Well done, Ashiq! Best wishes. Pandita
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