I Need You, Father

 dramatic verse 

Father, no other one
can manage
the crossing of my Jordan
like You do.
I need my Navigator, Jesus!

Father, what a novel notion -
your grace, the norm for justice.
not just your love but mercy too.
I need evil’s Nemesis, Jesus!

Father, ordained at your hand,
Christ offered us life
by dying on Calvary.
There is no one like your Son -
always available to help
I need your Offering to us, Jesus!

Father, omnipotent over all things
one Lord, our example,  
occupied with obedience,
Overlord of the universe, 
I need your spirit to help 
I need to be like Jesus!

written 9/3/2014

Regina Riddle,  Prayer (free verse)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Meier-Hans Avatar
September 7, 2014 at 7:05 PM
Congratulations Reason.
Poteet Avatar
September 8, 2014 at 8:15 PM
Congratulations to you Brenda on your big win in the abecedarian contest...a notable piece. I appreciate the read here and the remarks, Grateful indeed.
Johnson Avatar
September 7, 2014 at 5:54 PM
A great poem. All things through Jesus. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
Andresen Avatar
September 7, 2014 at 6:08 AM
- Congratulations on your winning poem in the contest   "Prayer",Reason !! - A lovely prayer and a pleasure to read - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Mehta Avatar
September 7, 2014 at 5:13 AM
Lovely write on faith, quite creative, Reason. Congrats
Mcintosh Avatar
September 6, 2014 at 11:42 PM
Amen and Congratulations. With love and prayers, Gina
Poteet Avatar
September 8, 2014 at 8:17 PM
Thank you, Gina for the consideration of a placement in your contest on prayer. And thank you for your prayers.
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September 4, 2014 at 3:37 AM
Amen to all you say here, Reason. This is one of the best prayer poems I have read. Please join me in praying for world peace. Love, Carolyn
Poteet Avatar
September 4, 2014 at 9:43 PM
Thanks, Carolyn, I will do just that. Appreciate the comment on my prayer of praise.
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