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I Need To Live

Just because your voice reaches halfway around the world doesn't mean you are wiser than when it reached only to the end of the bar. Edward R. Murrow don't teach me how to think when all I want to know is how to live a self-crowned sparrow perches up on high a song he sings slowly swirls the storms as if life itself weren't already wrong like him, extols are the only norm fly now where the cliffs are bare where sullen is your sacred air for beats of the heart dare move under undue distress fly away now where the nest is neat and fledglings fall upon your feats rise me with a ruse of wit where simple doesn't merely fit with trills of tripe and finer grit something fresh and neatly writ I don't need your force fed fodder I need to live or why even bother

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Date: 12/1/2017 12:37:00 PM
Oh this poem is beautifully written. I can just picture all these things happening as I read. Have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 11/25/2017 8:07:00 AM
Very clever. I enjoyed your poem. Congrats, Tim.
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Date: 11/15/2017 2:51:00 PM
I was not familiar with this famous quote by this particular gentleman; or if I was I was not aware of it...but thanks to you, Tim, I am now -- and what a cracker! Enjoyed the read -- congrats on your POTW award! My best regards - cheers! :) john
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Date: 11/15/2017 7:19:00 AM
Hello Tim, Congratulations to you on the POTW honor!! "I Need To Live" is a terrific write. And the lead-off from Edward R. Murrow really sets the theme up. I read your poem actually several times to really think about the words and the whole word-picture. Superbly Written, and A FAVE IN MY BOOK!! Cheers and Best, Gary
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Date: 11/12/2017 7:08:00 AM
Back to say a big Congratulations on POTW Akkina. So well deserved my dearest friend....Maria xxx
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Date: 11/12/2017 4:40:00 AM
Wonderful write, Tim, with exquisite phrasing and substance, and a strong but careful message ... superb! Congrats on POTW! :-)
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Date: 11/9/2017 6:21:00 PM
I'm a few days late but I'm still congratulating you anyways. Great write Tim! Hugs :)
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Date: 11/9/2017 9:38:00 AM
I love your wit and swagger. It becomes you. eight stars. Congrats on your POTW.
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Date: 11/5/2017 10:43:00 PM
This is exceptional Tim! So happy to see it honored as POTW! Congratulations! : )
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Date: 11/5/2017 11:43:00 AM
Many congrats Tim a very worthy recipient of POTW:-) Sadly the fodder will continue as your words will fall on deaf ears:-( hugs jan xx
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Date: 11/5/2017 10:04:00 AM
Congratulations!
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Date: 11/5/2017 9:59:00 AM
Way to go Tim, an excellent choice for POTW! If they had a POTM this would be a contender.
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Date: 11/5/2017 6:08:00 AM
I'm sorry I missed this one last week. It is absolutely awesome! POTD!!! Your last 4 line stanza is exceptional, Tim. Sometimes the most memorable words are those whispered...
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Date: 10/31/2017 4:00:00 PM
- Tim, ... I'm just saying: THANK YOU! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/30/2017 7:04:00 AM
Awesome quote to start this thoughtful write. And those two closing lines are gems. Great write my friend.
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Date: 10/29/2017 11:30:00 PM
Came to read this again, such truth in this!
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Date: 10/29/2017 10:12:00 AM
You are an amazing poet, Tim. Never doubt that...keep writing and those who love and appreciate you will keep coming round. Hugs
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Jean Murray
Date: 10/31/2017 7:10:00 PM
Amen!
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 10/29/2017 11:30:00 PM
That's for sure Eileen, his poems like yours are so romantic and also filled with deeper life meanings and wisdom's!!
Date: 10/29/2017 8:53:00 AM
Very well expressed Tim...I liked the monorhyme stanza..best wishes
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Date: 10/28/2017 10:07:00 PM
Live it up Tim, terrific write...
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Date: 10/28/2017 8:23:00 PM
I like, this is expressed so poetically and so well, I am sure Gary would also love this poem! Cheers!
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Date: 10/28/2017 5:53:00 PM
Lovely thought, articulated with passion!
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Date: 10/28/2017 5:27:00 PM
hats off, tim...this is an empowering read... huggs
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Date: 10/28/2017 3:41:00 PM
wow Tim this sure packs a punch and none of us need to be force fed fodder - sadly some folks preen and crow but have nothing realyl to say mmmm Maybe i better start writing decent poems not poop lol:-) hugs jan xx
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Lin Lane
Date: 11/5/2017 9:25:00 AM
Considering that the source is worthless.
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Jan Allison
Date: 11/5/2017 8:59:00 AM
Lin I rest my case from the comment below! :-( hugs jan xx
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Lin Lane
Date: 11/5/2017 6:14:00 AM
Everything you write is decent, Jan...humorous and sincere... and YES you are fantastic
Date: 10/28/2017 2:59:00 PM
Wow! This is a fav. This kicks butt :)
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Date: 10/28/2017 2:02:00 PM
Whoa! Sock it to me dude! Triple dub ~ j
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