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For Refrains in 8 Poetry Contest sponsored by Joseph May

There's only so much I can stand. I'll go nuts with one more demand. Boss, take me from the rotation - oh, the joy of a vacation. What a relief, I had to stop. I can feel my blood pressure drop where no one knows my location - oh, the joy of a vacation. It's nice to watch the river flow, nothing to do, nowhere to go. I can use this relaxation - oh, the joy of a vacation. What's this I see as I recline - my boss in the camp next to mine, a ghastly hallucination - oh, the joy of a vacation.

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Date: 3/21/2025 11:14:00 AM
Very nicely penned, Congrats on your win
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David Crandall
Date: 3/21/2025 2:14:00 PM
Thanks Joseph, and thanks for having the contest!
Date: 3/21/2025 10:58:00 AM
lol A fun read! Congratulations on your win!
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David Crandall
Date: 3/21/2025 2:14:00 PM
Thanks Karen!
Date: 3/21/2025 8:41:00 AM
Too funny, congratulations
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David Crandall
Date: 3/21/2025 8:55:00 AM
Thanks Terry!

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