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Love Has Finally Won

In times of distress, my love I must confess, I love you beyond time, space and measure- With all of your charm I’m completely impressed, as you bring me sincere compassion and pleasure. I love you beyond time, space and measure, like pebbles surfacing the shore, I couldn’t ask for more- As you bring me sincere compassion and pleasure, I plead with you for your passion, so let’s close the door. Like pebbles surfacing the shore, I couldn’t ask for more, like a strong tide by the sea you encompass me- I plead with you for your passion, so let’s close the door, like a bald eagle soaring in flight, you set me free. Like a strong tide by the sea you encompass me, as we dance under the moonlight with romance- Like a bald eagle soaring in flight, you set me free, and to think our love started with one simple glance. As we dance under the moonlight with romance, I see your silhouette and crave your tender kiss- And to think our love started with one simple glance, when the sun fades in the west, it’s you that I miss. I see your silhouette and crave your tender kiss, with all of your charm I’m completely impressed- When the sun fades in the west, it’s you that I miss, in times of distress, my love I must confess. WRITE ME A PANTOUM - Poetry Contest October 5, 2017

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Date: 10/19/2017 7:58:00 PM
Beautiful poem, Luloo! Congrats!! Janice
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Date: 10/19/2017 2:36:00 PM
My word Laura, Your write the most romantic and down to earth writes. I liked the realness and honesty of this write. You are so lucky to have a love like this in your life. Congratulations on your high placement in the contest. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
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Date: 10/19/2017 12:32:00 PM
So beautiful and romantic LuLoo:-) many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/19/2017 11:01:00 AM
Laura, congratulations on your win !
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Date: 10/19/2017 5:01:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Laura, beautiful and so well written. :))
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Lu Loo
Date: 10/19/2017 5:25:00 AM
thank you so much Roy :)
Date: 10/18/2017 10:00:00 PM
Laura, congrats on your win; this is such a beautiful love poem!
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Lu Loo
Date: 10/19/2017 5:24:00 AM
thank you for your kindness John! :)
Date: 10/18/2017 9:24:00 PM
Returning to congratulate you Laura on your top win with your beautifully written and romantic poem.
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Lu Loo
Date: 10/19/2017 5:24:00 AM
many thanks Susan :)
Date: 10/18/2017 9:02:00 PM
Congrats on your first place win, Luloo! Lovely!
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Lu Loo
Date: 10/19/2017 5:24:00 AM
thank you so much for my top placement sweet Kim! I am honored this poem means a lot to me...:)
Date: 10/9/2017 9:31:00 PM
A lovely and romantic pantoum Laura. Well written and expressed with wonderful imagery, rhythm and rhyme. Enjoyed. Good luck in the contest!
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Lu Loo
Date: 10/17/2017 7:38:00 AM
many thanks Susan :)
Date: 10/7/2017 9:15:00 AM
Laura, this is such a sweet profession of love. Good luck in the contest.
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Lu Loo
Date: 10/17/2017 7:38:00 AM
thank you John :)

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