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I, Mother

I often bring my baby flowers,
and ponder on what kind of mother I would have been.

But I know that I would have been just great,
my little boy would have grown up surrounded with love.

The beauty of his childhood stolen,
I will never see the man he would have been in life.

I would have taught him all that I know,
but would let him free to fly with his own wings and mind.

When he crashed I would always be there,
to pick up all the broken pieces and say, " be strong."

Yes, I would have been a good mother,
to this sweet little boy who never saw the blue sky.

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October 14, 2017

Poetry/Free Verse/I, Mother
Copyright Protected, ID 17-9495-43-0
All Rights Reserved.  Written Under Pseudonym.


Submitted to the contest, Best Free Verse Oct - Dec, 2017
sponsor, John Hamilton

Fourth Place
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Written for the contest, Parenthood
sponsor, Silent One

Second Place
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Scars Avatar
January 9, 2018 at 11:04 AM
so sadly beautiful sweet Broken Wings, congrats lovely lady :)-luloo
Gauthier Avatar
January 6, 2018 at 6:50 PM
Straight to the heart. Wonderful poem well deserving of a win, BW.
Hamilton Avatar
January 6, 2018 at 9:06 AM
Very touching write Constance, I'm sure you would have been a great mother, your love shines through this write, congrats on a fine placement!
Ditshwele Avatar
November 6, 2017 at 7:18 AM
beautiful art Wings, congrats on your win...
Barden Avatar
October 25, 2017 at 8:11 PM
Blessings and congrats for your well-deserved win, Constance - keep up the wonderful work, my friend! :-)
Gupta Avatar
October 23, 2017 at 9:13 AM
Congratulations on your win, Constance ...
Haight Avatar
October 21, 2017 at 5:59 PM
So very heartbreaking, Constance. You would have been a wonderful mother...your love and good heart show through your wonderful poetry. Congrats on your fine placement. Hugs, Sandra
Y. Avatar
October 20, 2017 at 5:31 PM
Hi BW, Your heartfelt write brought tears to my eyes. In your poems we see your beautiful heart and I'm sure you would have been a wonderful mother. Congratulations on your 2nd place win. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
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October 20, 2017 at 4:28 PM
This is heartbreaking, I am sure you would have a wonderful mother.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
Roper Avatar
October 14, 2017 at 12:20 PM
Broken Wings, you would have been a wonderful mom. Very heartfelt poem a winner already . Hugs Eve ~`*
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