Eileen Manassian Poet Rhyme

I Miss- for Contest

I miss the sweet comraderie
The words you'd leave for me to see
The teasing tongue tenacity
I never thought one day you'd be
Away from here, away from me

I miss the way you'd make me smile
Through darkest days, a word worthwhile
Would scatter gloom and chase the vile
Oh, how your charm could so beguile
I miss your certain kind of style

I miss the mystery in the rhyme
The sweet sensation every time
I'd read the most melodious chime
Now that you're gone, it's such a crime
I miss the banter, so sublime

I miss the way you used to tease
Then placate me just to appease
The playful lines were meant to please
My little heart, your lines would squeeze
I miss your spirit's gentle breeze

I miss you, dear, I miss you still
Your place no one can truly fill
I'll wait and wait and wait until
You come back and take up the quill
And let your presence, joy instill

I miss you...

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Richard Lamoureux December 5, 2024 at 6:11 AM I hope your friend returns. This is well expressed. There was a time when you were away from here that I left several comments on previous poems you wrote just to let you know you were not forgotten. You might want to try that with your friend. You never know what they might be dealing with. Hugs Rick. Eileen Manassian May 17, 2026 at 4:23 AM What a sweet comment. Too bad I didn't see our earlier. You're a constant for me

Ink Empress August 8, 2024 at 6:07 AM Dear eileen, its so touching and so sincere, the kind of thoughts we have when we truly miss someone , like how youv said, and from what youv expressed shows that you are a real one that sincerely misses your friend. And i love your rhymes! So creative and rhythmic. Beautiful poem. The ending made my heart warm! “ I'll wait and wait and wait until You come back and take up the quill And let your presence, joy instill” so sweet! Congratulations on your win! Thank you for sharing

Paige Hind August 1, 2024 at 12:18 PM Beautiful writing, Eileen! The flow was so effortless...loved the last stanza Eileen Manassian August 5, 2024 at 12:27 AM Thank you, dear. Lovely of you to visit.

Victor Buhagiar July 29, 2024 at 10:19 PM A great tribute to your friend. Brilliant poem. Each stanza with a monorhyme of its own. Great write. Eileen Manassian July 30, 2024 at 1:29 PM Your praise is a great boost to my ego. Thanks ever so much, Victor. You know I enjoy your poetry immensely. As to mention of my friend... last I checked, friends don't just disappear. Maybe I need to rethink that definition.

Richard D Seal July 29, 2024 at 4:49 PM Irresistible, love the phrasing,love the flow, love the feeling, if this does not win I’ll eat my hat, you can choose which one,I’ll send you a list, I have many. Take care, Richard Eileen Manassian July 30, 2024 at 1:27 PM Well if it isn't Mr. Richard D Seal! I know I said I'd wait and wait, but sure took you long enough to get here! I do hope this does well. Either way, I'm a winner cause if it doesn't, I get to see you eat your fedora. Don't stay away too long. I mean seriously, what better do you have to do in your life?!

Mystic Rose Rose July 28, 2024 at 1:28 PM How we miss those special people who have connected to us in a dear and deep way, yes the markings of their words remain with us forever, thanks for this very tender poem Eileen :) Eileen Manassian July 30, 2024 at 1:19 PM True, my dear. Some people are really unforgettable. Though time and distance come between, word sentiments are forever. Big hugs

Paul Callus July 28, 2024 at 11:15 AM I can relate to missing people: their poetry and distinctive style, the sharing of words, comments, joy and suffering. There is always a chance that some of them will reappear, except for those who sadly passed away. ~ Warm regards & hugs Eileen // paul Eileen Manassian July 30, 2024 at 1:24 PM True. I've been going over my older writes and reading comments... deleting some things... cherishing others. I read comments by dear ones who have passd on. It's so sad. Some I've collaborated with have either passed away or are no longer a part of this community It saddens my heart. I'm so glad you're still here, dear one, though you've been MIA for a time Big hugs

Eve Roper July 28, 2024 at 9:43 AM This reminded me of your daughter, like if you were talking to her. Soup mail Eileen Manassian July 30, 2024 at 1:20 PM I'll see her in two days time! I can't wait... that is if the airport stays open. The situation in Lebanon is volatile at the moment.

Hilda Greenhough July 28, 2024 at 8:42 AM This poem is a winner with me. I love how your rhymes impart a flowing story. Good luck with the contest. Eileen Manassian July 30, 2024 at 1:17 PM Thank you for your kind comment. I'm glad it resonated with you.

Joseph P. DiMino July 28, 2024 at 8:35 AM "I miss the way you'd make me smile Through darkest days, a word worthwhile Would scatter gloom and chase the vile Oh, how your charm could so beguile I miss your certain kind of style"-- Superb! The entire poem...you get a FAV from me. "I'll wait and wait and wait until You come back and take up the quill And let your presence, joy instill" -- Divine poetry! Eileen Manassian July 30, 2024 at 1:17 PM Thank you for making this a favourite. Much appreciated. I especially like the compliment, Divine poetry. Bless you :)

Crystol Woods July 28, 2024 at 7:10 AM Wonderful rhymes and so relatable... good luck in the contest! Xo Eileen Manassian July 28, 2024 at 7:57 AM Thank you for the return visit. Good to make your acquaintance.

Heidi Sands July 28, 2024 at 6:56 AM This is beautifully written Eileen. I miss people too :) Eileen Manassian July 28, 2024 at 7:57 AM I'm sure you do, dear. I guess it's a party of life. Thanks for the return visit.

Kim Rodrigues July 28, 2024 at 5:36 AM So sweet, Eileen! So many are missed in this community. A fave! Hugs ~ Kim Eileen Manassian July 28, 2024 at 7:56 AM Thank you for the visit. Yes. I've tried contacting some of them. A few responded. Many didn't. I myself have been away from soup many a time and might do so again if I don't find community.

James Marshall Goff July 28, 2024 at 12:02 AM Nice! Eileen Manassian July 28, 2024 at 12:33 AM What a lovely comment. Just what I needed. You're welcome for tea and biscuits anytime. Thanks for worrying about Lebanon. The threat of war is always looming.

Deb M July 27, 2024 at 2:33 PM Eileen a very beautifully sad poem….its apparent how much this person/poet meant to you and how much you miss them. It is sad when people we care about or enjoy move on! Debx Eileen Manassian July 27, 2024 at 2:45 PM Yes, dear. It truly is sad. I'm happy that I can read previous poems and comments and that helps. To be honest... I'm sure they are missing being present here

Jan Allison July 27, 2024 at 12:09 PM I could relate to this big time and wish I'd written it for Darren Watson my wonderful poetry partner - I never check out Jadazzle United now Eileen, just keep with the special memories and he help give me confidence to become the poet I am now:-) hugs Jan xx Eileen Manassian July 27, 2024 at 2:21 PM Hey sweetie... you guys were special. I read a post of yours while going down memory lane. How times change. I'm sorry you can't write with him anymore. Thanks for stopping by. It doesn't matter, I guess if this poet doesn't show up or write anymore. I can always read the pervious writes, eh?

Silent One July 27, 2024 at 11:29 AM This could be about so many different people.. but, I think this is for a fellow poet? I can feel the sensation of sadness in your words...Beautiful and touching poetry.. Eileen Manassian July 27, 2024 at 11:37 AM Yes. It's for a fellow poet from some time ago who no longer writes. A dear friend...Thank you for the visit. Hope all is well.