I Met a Man

I met a man and his young wife He asked would I be in his life No far too much pain I could be the first wife he said Not I even if she was now dead I will ask again. 25/04/2012 Entry for Black Eyed Susans Contest: Tail Rhyme Time

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/7/2012 8:10:00 AM

Interesting work..Leaves me wondering about this man...Sara..Your presence at my work was uplifting..

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 5/5/2012 2:18:00 PM

It was shipped this week. Sorry for the delay. Let me know when u receive it please. Hugs n luv Michael

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/5/2012 11:00:00 AM

haunting melody with words that entice, mandy.... best of luck and huggs!:)

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 5/4/2012 12:44:00 PM

Clever tail rhyme Mandy, I could never have pulled one off like this. Wonderful entry for the contest with my best wishes!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/3/2012 10:59:00 PM

Or you could become a polygamist with him. heehee. I see Gwen writing about the tail rhyme form. Yes, it sure is tricky. Way to do yours!!!

Gwendolen Song

Date: 5/3/2012 10:10:00 PM

Mandy..I know this is a winner with its wit and depth of tho't ...what exactly IS the trick to writing a great tail rhyme...I think it is a tricky form and I have only written 1 or 2 of them to date...Well, yours is great and you should be proud..BTW, congrats on all the other amazing wins you've had on here lately. I am not on here as much as the summer approaches...if u are still traveling-stay safe! Gwendolen