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I Met a Cloud

One day I met a cloud and rode its breeze, above the hill tops and towering trees. I touched blue skies and felt the gentle wind, embraced the Sun as though we were old friends. On my journey I saw a babbling brook, I watched in wonder at the path it took. Through open meadows of green and pine thick wood, the world seemed small from where I stood. I gazed at the splendor of God's grand gifts, as I sat on my little cloud adrift. The Sun soon found the horizon and set, upon a sweet memory I shall never forget. When night began to fall upon my day, we said farewell and went our separate ways. 3/9/19

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Date: 3/15/2019 8:17:00 AM
Hello Wren, Oh my gosh! I felt like I had a ride on a cloud, just by reading this poem. have a nice day my friend.
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Wren Rushing
Date: 3/15/2019 8:33:00 AM
Thank you Darlene my dear friend!
Date: 3/13/2019 11:16:00 PM
Back with congratulations!
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Wren Rushing
Date: 3/14/2019 5:27:00 PM
Thank you P.S.!
Date: 3/13/2019 3:51:00 PM
This majestic poem takes me away. Congrats on your placement!
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Wren Rushing
Date: 3/13/2019 7:42:00 PM
Thank you Juliet have a blessed evening my friend!
Date: 3/13/2019 1:48:00 PM
Wren, I enjoyed this. I guess I haven't yet met the right cloud :) Congratulations on your win on Mile 23 of my 2019 Poetry Marathon Contest! Only 4 contests to go before the final! ~Mark
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Wren Rushing
Date: 3/13/2019 7:41:00 PM
Thank you Mark! Your placement in your contest has put me on cloud 9! Thanks for sponsoring!
Date: 3/13/2019 1:26:00 PM
Bravo, Wren. Congrats on your win.
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Wren Rushing
Date: 3/13/2019 7:39:00 PM
Thank you Line have wonderful evening my friend!
Date: 3/9/2019 7:25:00 AM
Wonderful imagery..so well written, Wren.
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Wren Rushing
Date: 3/9/2019 8:23:00 AM
Thank you Vijay!
Date: 3/9/2019 6:18:00 AM
Magical. Enjoyed :)
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Wren Rushing
Date: 3/9/2019 8:23:00 AM
Thank you P.S.!
Date: 3/9/2019 5:59:00 AM
Charming, Wren.
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Wren Rushing
Date: 3/9/2019 8:21:00 AM
Thank you Line, have a wonderful weekend!
Date: 3/9/2019 5:24:00 AM
a great nature poem, I like being the cloud Noels_Art
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Wren Rushing
Date: 3/9/2019 8:20:00 AM
Thank you Noel!
Date: 3/9/2019 4:35:00 AM
What a beautiful journey to travel on with you. I really enjoyed reading this,Wren.
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Wren Rushing
Date: 3/9/2019 8:20:00 AM
Thank you Wendy, have a blessed day!

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