Home » Poems » Wilma Neels » I Melt Away

I Melt Away

cast upon my heart
your name and face imprinted 
cast upon my lips

your kisses, sweet and sultry
I melt away into you

lovepassiontanka

♡Like0

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Jayne Eggins

October 3, 2010 at 10:14 PM

Wilma this is just breathtaking Tanka ... beautifully penned and executed ... brava ... love Jayne

Harry Horsman

October 2, 2010 at 12:10 AM

love this Wilma, such honesty and truth. you are one very sincere lady. Harry

Gert W. Knop

October 1, 2010 at 3:12 PM

Hey Wilma, so well penned! I belive James! We now got the "crispy Scottish air" here by now! But this piece warms one up! Ek hoop dat jy met 'n groot en ontspanning Sondag ... Gert:!)

Carol Sunshine Brown

October 1, 2010 at 12:16 PM

I stopped back Wilma to thank you for your always kind comments on my poetry. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

September 30, 2010 at 6:40 PM

ok, wilma, now ask me again why you thought I was asking you if you were in love?? This is excellent!

Diane Locksley

September 30, 2010 at 4:50 PM

Very passionate, Wilma! Has a wonderful flow to it as well. Best to you, Diane

Sidney Hall Mad Poet

September 30, 2010 at 3:44 PM

I want you already. juicy poem girlfriend.

Michael J. Falotico

September 30, 2010 at 2:10 PM

Got me warm with this one!!! luv Michael

James Fraser

September 30, 2010 at 2:09 PM

I need the Scottish air to cool me down now, it's so loving Wilma >> James :)

Daver Austin

September 30, 2010 at 11:30 AM

This is HOT, Wilma. good use of Tanka. Dave

Carol Sunshine Brown

September 30, 2010 at 11:29 AM

What an outstanding way to enjoy a day. I am so happy to be able to read the excellent poetry here at PoetrySoup today. Hope you are enjoying your day and finding much inspiration along the way Wilma. Love, Carol

Lucinda Bulger

September 30, 2010 at 10:39 AM

wooooow, that is nice! I like it! and by the way, I haven't been @ the soup in months only to post and jump back off the computer, I very much appreciated your comment while ago, I used to read your work regularly, whether I left comment or not, take good care, blessings, Cindy

Carolyn Devonshire

September 30, 2010 at 10:15 AM

Sounds very romantic, Wilma, being able to "melt away into" someone who has captured your heart. Such a beautiful tanka, dear! Thanks for your good wishes on my journey. I'll be leaving tomorrow morning. Love, Carolyn