I Melt

My breath catches in my throat.

My very heart skips a beat

When you look at me that way.

In your arms I melt.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Rodrigues Avatar
December 15, 2020 at 5:25 AM
Took know this feeling is to love this!
Nudelman Avatar
February 18, 2011 at 2:10 PM
Beautiful....
Dietrich Avatar
January 17, 2011 at 7:53 PM
VEry romantic. Very sweet. Congratulations, Francine. Luv, Andrea
Kendrick Avatar
January 17, 2011 at 4:24 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
Omaidin Avatar
January 17, 2011 at 2:39 PM
Wonderfully romantic, I love it, congrats Déirdre Ó Maidin
Laan Avatar
January 17, 2011 at 1:57 PM
I love this, congrats on your win:))
Ruebel Avatar
January 17, 2011 at 11:04 AM
Hello Francine, Congratulations on your win for this one. I can relate to this wonderful feeling you have shown us all with your beautiful words. As Always, Shar
Brown Avatar
January 17, 2011 at 8:44 AM
Congratulations for your win in the "Love or Humor" contest Francine, sponsored by John Freeman. Love, Carol
Johnson Avatar
January 16, 2011 at 8:57 PM
Great little gem. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
Mannan Avatar
January 16, 2011 at 8:26 PM
Many congratulations dear friend for this win.
Sweetheart Avatar
January 16, 2011 at 5:53 PM
Congrats Francine on your fantastic win in John's contest with this fabulous dodoitsu my friend.. enjoy another sweet success with luv..
Onclaud Avatar
January 16, 2011 at 5:53 PM
i melt too with this grrreat stuff ! thumbs up and cheers for the win! : ) nette
Freeman Avatar
January 16, 2011 at 3:32 PM
Like butter Francine. Smile. Congratulations on your worthy poem's 4th place. Agape, Moses
Devonshire Avatar
January 16, 2011 at 3:17 PM
Ah, I remember this feeling well, Francine. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
Duffin Avatar
January 16, 2011 at 11:01 AM
Hi Francine. A beautiful love story, written as though this happened to you , Eamon
Pettit Avatar
January 16, 2011 at 10:33 AM
Reading this reminds me of a slice of American cheese sitting atop a sizzling hamburger. Good descriptiveness here.
Fraser Avatar
January 16, 2011 at 10:18 AM
This poem has the mmm factor Francine, and the title is so apt....:)
Sweetheart Avatar
January 15, 2011 at 9:45 PM
Perfect piece Francine for either Michael or John's contest so good luck no matter which one u enter it into.. my friend.. your title speaks volumes luv..
Anderson Avatar
January 15, 2011 at 8:48 PM
Nice poem...good luck in the contest...Jimmy
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