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I May Be a Very Good Person

ten donkeys in a field first one never sees bad second one never talks bad third one never hears bad fourth one never thinks bad fifth one never does bad sixth one is faithful and honest seventh one is sincere in duty eight one truthful never tells lie ninth one tries for well being of others tenth one is filled with wisdom all are good for their characters If all the donkeys live in me I may be a very good person

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Date: 7/29/2014 2:24:00 PM
Anytime BL
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Date: 7/26/2014 2:55:00 PM
BL, WOW, WOW, in that case, I want all 10 donkeys to live inside of me too. :) I enjoyed this poem. It was very interesting,... I'm guessing you have 10 donkeys, living inside you:)... You are a very good person, and this I know :) Have a nice day..XOX..Linda
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Date: 7/26/2014 11:57:00 PM
Thanks a lot for your appreciation, my *friend. Loved always,bl
Date: 7/25/2014 2:54:00 PM
Yes it sounds like you are perhaps a very nice person - but pardon me but you must be rather large with all those donkeys living in you !
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Date: 7/26/2014 10:46:00 AM
Thanks for your comment. Summation of all the qualities of ten donkeys here in mentioned is very hard to cultivate where very deep refined insight requires with acute devotion,i feel. Loved always, my poet friend, bl
Date: 7/25/2014 12:29:00 PM
- The donkey is not stupid ..... I have heard : "stubborn like a donkey" - I believe 110% that you are a good person :))) - Enjoy reading (with a smile :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/26/2014 10:39:00 AM
My lovely friend, a lot of thanks to you from my heart for your appreciation with nice comment. Loved always, bl

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